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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    yo that style you doin azteka is fresshh
    i dont know of any bites!
    keep that shit up reguardless!
    KFC FAM!
     
  2. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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    STEYER- fix tha "E" nd lose the bottom extension on tha "Y"
    TECHKANUCK - fix ur letter style
    EVASION - not feelin tha "S"
    HAZE - thaz clean
    TASTY - there both hella clean, jus on tha top one, id fix tha triangle part u got goin 4 the top part of the "S"
    GLYCE - keep workin, especially on ur "K"
    SILENT - we both kno u kan do better
    MOSE - wow work on ur letters a lot more, tha "S" and "E" r horrible, nd they don't evn fit the style
     
  3. idleon3

    idleon3 Member

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  4. ekimboi1

    ekimboi1 Senior Member

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    yea, its good u like to experiment but yea, go simpler!
     
  5. AZTEKA

    AZTEKA Senior Member

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    Im sure its just a similarty and NOT a bite.

    K F C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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  7. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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  8. steyr

    steyr Senior Member

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  9. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    make it look more like an E is my advice
     
  10. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    yo everyone has already told you this....
    you need to lose all your extensions and extra shit

    go back to simpler shit because its not working out for the past few sketches
     
  11. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Steyr- Evasion- Haz-e---- You're all on the right track. Keep it up.

    Steyr- that last outline had a cold lock on the overall flow and some of the detailwork shows that you're really understanding what you observe. You need to focus on letter structure now to take it to the next level. if you look at each letter singularly, they aren't bad, but they aren't remarkable either. You should be able to look at each letter and enjoy them as a standalone, ya know? I'm looking foreward to seeing more in the future.

    Taste- Breaking it down a bit huh? Going simple? It looks pretty good, just don't ever simplify your handys. I'm still a huge fan of them.
     
  12. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    yeah steyr do uppercase

    EVAD - The colors do not fit that piece in anyway haha. They are like balloon colors. Your character came out a little fat too but other than that its a nice solid drawing.
     
  13. steyr

    steyr Senior Member

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    iight you guys, i post some of my simples. but they kinda suck. i gotta get new batteries for camera first.
     
  14. steyr

    steyr Senior Member

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    thats pretty dope.
    the letters are all nice. accept the yellow one. what letter is that, a C?
     
  15. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    i know they dont fit the girl i was with said it looked scary so i made dare i say "happy" colors for herand the characs supposed to be chunky cuz he's me:D
     
  16. MOSE

    MOSE New Member

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    shut the fuck up, dick head.

    two of the letters dont fit the style? there is only four letters...youre an idiot.
     
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2008
  17. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    I dont think mose's critisism was very helpful or valid at all but dont overreact and cause a fight please.
     
  18. steyr

    steyr Senior Member

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    mose- dont hate on kase.
     
  19. IkontheHologram

    IkontheHologram Member

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  20. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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