sniz--just keep workin at it buddy itll get better ideel-- iduno wat 2 say jus keep oracticing trap-- its cool man nice n simple i suck at giving crits anyone have crits for mine??? [Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6213/anna4001tz5.jpg
some shit from tonight... painting trains is hard businesss llooll [Broken External Image]:http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/2202/cimg0101ve3.jpg CHROME BURNERRZ RULE [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9397/cimg0103yz3.jpg lol i actually used chrome wow crits
BUMP! REV- The Chrome is fuckin hot with the multi color 3D AVORE- If you want the bow in it keep it uniform from first to last?
AMK: ILLEST PIECE YET!!! REvid: nice train piece. feeling it more than the burner Garbage: lookin real nice Tech: you need to work on your handstyle and loose the drips. they are just kinda getting played out.
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yeah def ^ im feelin that e... here's a peice im trying to work out... fuck that grey marker. crit? im just getting some style with it, soo..
Akel!!!!! i wanna see some of your stuff. you havent posted anything in a while. i like your letters ha. Due: i saw your bombs nice spot, but you need to simplify those. dont go overboard with extensions and keep your structure REVID: im not hatin man. there are a couple of your pieces that i really dig and ive let you know. you are a coloring mad man, but a few of your pieces the letters will not look as clean or extension will look funky and wont be coming from places. If you go back a couple days i gave you lots of compliments and you never said anything. dont know if you saw them or not. i was just saying on those simps on the train look better cause it looks legit , like thats what it would actually look like and compaited to that piece i like it better. I also said im really diggin your throw now its ten time better than before but i dont know if you read that either. you handstyle has improved a ton as well compaired to a couple of days ago the only thing id lose is the crown but it flows really nice. keep it up man. i want to see some painted shit soon and a bump from a few pages back
RANK - HOOTTTT. Man. Haha, i love that simple man. THe throwie is good too. Snap - thats a nice solid simple you got there. Overdue - Maybe show us something other than one letter? Based on that letter, it seems like you havet got a good concept of the basics yet.
pretty dope man ur stuff is pretty unique, i think that you should work on coombining that with more of a bar ish letter style your result might be good because you have a different approach to it and thats cool but try something to make it more of like add 3d ect. but i like where your going keep it up man
neoz-that Shit Is Sweet Keep Up The Good Work I Like Your Characters Alot ...amk-your Characters Are Fresh Too
ik its a lota shit but its about time... [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/2857/alerg042iw6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5104/alerg039it2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3458/alerg037ng1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3458/alerg037ng1.d4801e082c.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/4690/alerg034ot3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4305/alerg035tn3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4426/alerg037nh4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4426/alerg037nh4.5d82ad7abc.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3471/alerg033qu0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7993/alerg032pe7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7993/alerg032pe7.ccc43d6ecf.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3372/alerg031qh1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1104/alerg030xe1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1104/alerg030xe1.f5b55a0e57.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3433/alerg029km7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/198/alerg026rn1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/198/alerg026rn1.23dbe3b354.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8939/alerg023qj4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8939/alerg023qj4.3e5e67d121.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9707/alerg027ab6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7412/alerg026ef4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7412/alerg026ef4.b6822733de.jpg critts?
and a bump from a few pages back [/QUOTE] i like that silver, either you put shadow under or it looks like its coming off of the page.
yo revid thats a cool style, but I don't think you got it on lock, what I don't like about it is that I've never really been able to read it because of the extra stuff before the L 'n also the stuff at the end. It makes me think its supposed to be some sort of letters, dlogos or something weird I might know about, non-writers would be way more confused. Maybe if you took some stuff off, or made it smaller it would look better, there also not exactly the same size and proportions so that adds to the wack. Other than that I'm not sure about that color scheme, the 3d looks more like an effect around the 3d as opposed to actual 3d. Its like a lighter or darker shade of blue 3d on a blue piece would compliment the colors, I don't see how the colors compliment the chrome.
why in gods name would you bumo something that huge. Kors its lookin prettty good but damn son it doesnt take a min to resize pics.
Amaze..i dont like the way your styles heading. rank nice dawse nice reeealllll olllddddd ! >> View attachment 338511 April 07 nnneeewww >> View attachment 338512 January 08
Bumpz View attachment 338514 View attachment 338515 Other than the Sieze nibble I'd say you've got a good grasp on throws, do really basic black and white outlines to get pieces down though: [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3458/alerg037ng1.jpg Kors, I would bump your shit, but you need to resize them things mang. I absolutely love this page: View attachment 338516