Bump this, really fresh.

 

i gave up on drawing complex shit for now haha, but heres another simple throwie style

 

ill.
illl.
illlll.
i like it

 

MOAR


i think i like this name, i might keep it...

 

Scream- I like it, maybe fix your g, kinda ruins the flow.

 

Revid....please notify me when you post your stuff.....i just shit myself in amazement.

 

try making the u looking part of the y round rather than flat at the bottom, and i would straighten out the bar a little too so it doesnt look like its sitting on a triangle. and the slime in the o is alright if you can pull it off, i dont think its really working with this piece, and also there shouldnt be highlights to the left of the slime unless theres a crack or something in your o and i cant see it.. but keep working on it. you might want to also try using shadows or darker spots within your fill, i think everyone should try this at some point, it can really add a lot of depth to your pieces and its handy if you dont have any decos or silver markers for highlights. try redoing the piece and use some lighter colors, i think it has lots of potential

sorry about all the text i got a little carried away with the crit i guess hah

edit: also i would loose the whole y and z overlapping deal, its definitely making it look a lot worse

 

Now thats how you crit!

 

revid i have to make you a throw dude
i am like o reeeetarted i wasted so much paper trying to get them today
and i missed a test
and was late for school in the morn cuz i was up all night trying at o's
all fer you

 

Now thats how you love! xD

 

scream- dumb fresh

teze, sorry haha
best i could come up with

 

AWE!
haze hahah my dude if you cant its cool!
thats funny as shit tho duuude!
hahaha oh my

 

naw dawg, it sharpie.

 

crits?

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good straight letters.
id like to see the throw right side up
it looks dope

 

nice job dude, loving the bubbles, i'd say go with more curves with your pieces because it would go well with that bubble thing going on. Nice name too, it's sick.

 

yea everything is wunderbar except the blue one

 

dont know why im posting this lolz
o fuckin well
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pogs man you totally inspired me tomake something new... and i like all of those a ton i dont even know how to crit em haha

munk i dont really like the U on the striahgt ones cause it doesnt go with the other letters but i do like them and nice fills/backgrounds also the throwies look good but i cant really tell because i cant see things upsidedown well...but i like em

revid haha i agrree man the fill is kinda wonky but its still a niece peice... cant wait to see it when its done

so, im tryin a new name...i did some research but i do not know still if the name is taken and or famous...let me know

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and i think the a is hot as hell