In response to "go back to simples" Crits?
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enor- i like the color scheme, but you should have kept the outline of the 3d solid; letters are decent but i personally dont like the middle bar of the E or the bend of the left leg of the N.
muse- nice two letters
spark-make the S the same fatness as K
cyto-keep bars consistant

 

base im a fan of that
get some color in it lets see it all done up

 

i can imagine that shit as a roller.
with a sick 3d.
oh yeeee

 

thanks for the crits I guess it pays to stay simple. Ill inject with color and a fine liner, hopefully it doesnt fuck it.

 

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Crits?

Base- Thats hot man, i think make the bottom bar on the E a little bit shorter.
Mar- I dunno i like the M, but im not sure about the other letters.
Muse- I dig it, make the centre bit in the m smaller and thats perfect.

 

muse your m hella looks like mf doom"s M

 

To bad ive enver seen that before.

 

just lettin you know,
i think your shit looks good though..........

 

Yea i know. Thnx though.

 

looks nothing like dooms m. for amk happy late bday. couldnt decide if i liked it colored or not
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BASE: shits fire.

 

the gap between the c and s is wayyyy to big.

 

bump chers amk sketch

 

aww. no bump for meh Seize? =[ hahaha

 

so make the C and the S connected?

 

i'd say bring the C bars closer to the center ( where the center of the E is)
and do the same with the bottom S bar.

 

i wouldnt say connected, just closer together and maybe just do some little adjustments to them so they actualyl fit closer together.
cause look at the cap between your first and second letter, then look at the gap between the c and the s.
not really the same you know.

 

Just a quickie with new name. Crit please:

 

work on it styll wheres the leg for a?