sheltr- What does it even say? But i guess it looks good to me.
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..says sheltr, hence the screen name
the S starts on the bottom left and its on its side if that makes it any bit easier

 

If I squint my eyes to make out the letters, it says ShFH and then the last letter looks like an I, K, and R all at the same time...

 

yeah...theres little connections off of the E, comes up from the bottom to make the E, same with the L, the T is a giant stick, with lines connecting the supposed to be top part of the T and the R, just yeah squint or some shit

and im done explaining, sorry for making it unreadable

 

You officially hit "lame" in my book...

 

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my 1st character crit?

 

wtf supremechris

-otek fix the e and k and reduce the size of the o
-sheltr i can't make it out
-tare i liked the old ones you did a couple pages back but yeah like pie said the t is too slanted
-atlok i can't see the s.
-aim you should focus on letter for now?

legible? says wage

 

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colored it =\ for some reason im in love with it


WAGE- I LIKE IT A Lot

 

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KASP, by rots

 

uhhhhh.
gooo back to simples.

 

wage- that shits fresh as fuck, the only thing i dont like is that it is all compressed
wanna exchange?

 

I think not.

 

he's already using bars and his style is decent.

 

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did this for a little battle between me and a crew member.
critics?

i hate my two o's btw

 

^^^both of you fools do simples,NOW!!!

 

emak, really feeling the simplicity of your first one.

 

work on simples. too many cats try to advance too quickly. work on letter structure wayyyy before you bust out some type of crazy style

 

shookone- I'd try to work on a good letter structure, the caracs are good though.
EMAK- I really like the first one. I'm not digging the style for the second one, it's very clean though.
Backalley Abortion Doctor- There's too much shit going on, go for a simpler style. Looks good though.
Cyto Aka Son1c- The outline and bubbles are great but I'm not digging the letter structure, specially for the R. Keep practicing.
exhale- I can't see what it reads, try something more simple.
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Here's mine guys, I did it last night cuz I couldn't sleep.

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