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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    ^^Forum sucks.

    *to shadowkater*
     
  2. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    lmao...thats a horrible forum...
     
  3. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture142.jpg
    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture143.jpg
    bigger V still needs some work, and fucked up fill on second

    scoot- I like the olik part but the h is a bit off, at least round the ends of the bars off on it i'd say
     
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  4. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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    i actually wanted crits more so on the holik one.. lol i forgot to put that
     
  5. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    woulda looked nicer with a clean, solid fill and a little bid of 3d.
     
  6. whatadizaster!

    whatadizaster! Senior Member

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    vois, like the bottom one. only thing i would say is not cut off the S
     
  7. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  8. Oser

    Oser Member

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    Atlok7 - I dont see anything in that scketh... I'd say to you to not not put too much things in it. make it more sample, and it would look better
     
  9. Oser

    Oser Member

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    But its a nice piece... why are you posting in the toy forum man??

    pce
     
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  10. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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  11. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    pretty damn ill.
    can imagine that filled in in greens.
     
  12. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    View attachment 354399

    Went shit when I coloured it.Says RAB

    That Busy piece up there is nice.Looks like a freestyle too.Props.
     
  13. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Bump
     
  14. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    bump

    drakula- the fill looks interesting but in general the whole thing is a bit messed up, tone it down and try the same style and it might work better
     
  15. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    bump bottom of page
    drakula, dont hide the a so much
     
  16. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    vois, that looks pretty decent. you should make the base of the V a bit smaller imo. keep the letters the same size.
    caiser, thats pretty sick, its kinna hard to make out. but it looks good. i actually prefer your previous couple of sketches.'
    busy, that looks good, im not feelin the arm that connects your "B" and "U" imo

    [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9487/belspiece1ey4.jpg
     
  17. capitol

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  18. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    OH SHIT!!! aisudfgajsf. getya simples!!!!
     
  19. hiser

    hiser Member

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    been painting maybe 2 months, but just starting to get serious with it.
    sketched this today in school mayyyne.

    crit as much as you want, i can take it :p.


    ai25.tinypic.com_2z6s1ft.jpg

    ai31.tinypic.com_1055mhj.gif
     
  20. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    no offence,
    lay off peicing for awhile.
    stick to basics, simple letters.
    once you get that packed down, move it up a notch.
    and loose the swirls in your throwup.