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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
lmao...thats a horrible forum...
bigger V still needs some work, and fucked up fill on second
scoot- I like the olik part but the h is a bit off, at least round the ends of the bars off on it i'd say
i actually wanted crits more so on the holik one.. lol i forgot to put that
woulda looked nicer with a clean, solid fill and a little bid of 3d.
vois, like the bottom one. only thing i would say is not cut off the S
bump for more crits
Atlok7 - I dont see anything in that scketh... I'd say to you to not not put too much things in it. make it more sample, and it would look better
But its a nice piece... why are you posting in the toy forum man??
pretty damn ill.
can imagine that filled in in greens.
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Went shit when I coloured it.Says RAB
That Busy piece up there is nice.Looks like a freestyle too.Props.
drakula- the fill looks interesting but in general the whole thing is a bit messed up, tone it down and try the same style and it might work better
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drakula, dont hide the a so much
vois, that looks pretty decent. you should make the base of the V a bit smaller imo. keep the letters the same size.
caiser, thats pretty sick, its kinna hard to make out. but it looks good. i actually prefer your previous couple of sketches.'
busy, that looks good, im not feelin the arm that connects your "B" and "U" imo
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that busy is nice take off some of the useless addons on the Y
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Stickers goin to seyar
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OH SHIT!!! aisudfgajsf. getya simples!!!!
been painting maybe 2 months, but just starting to get serious with it.
sketched this today in school mayyyne.
crit as much as you want, i can take it .
lay off peicing for awhile.
stick to basics, simple letters.
once you get that packed down, move it up a notch.
and loose the swirls in your throwup.
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