yeah i thought it looked atlok-esque, but certainly not a bite. to be honest the hand on the top left looks a little like pencil, but again i wouldn't call a bite. good work tho.
View attachment 354952 Pogs-Thats nice but I don't think the P fits in with the rest.Fatten it up a bit.
Raby, I'm really feeling that old school ish. Ohmigawd its totally that new guy, BAWKONER! [Broken External Image]:http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk192/DoctorLucifer/bawk1.jpg
scream out, thats dope, i like the angle of the arrows and how they point downwards. cover up the dead space inside your S and itll be ill. raby, im diggin your B and Y on the second sketch bawk, add a shadow to each letter, itll look a lot better imo [Broken External Image]:http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/5605/belspiece1zh5.jpg
Raby those are dope. Keep it up. Docter Lucifer, that styles fresh. Jetpack, it's alright but not really feeling the stuff all through the background. I'll post up a bunch of stuff later today with better pictures.
Thnkz for the crits guys.. ill work on my stuff asap.. gettin better every day. ( ilike my first one also)
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0290.jpg http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0293.jpg http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/DSC_0294.jpg new sketchies the second one is justa new style idk if i like it but it says ES and the last one i was just playin around with new name razoe crits appreciated