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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yo that looks sick sketch, his hair looks like cotton candy or some shit. diggin his eyes too
     
  2. Haz-E

    Haz-E Senior Member

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  3. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    close jetpack hes called muffin top

    haze u should make ur l and t bend in the same direction as the c,e and r
    for the flow
     
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  4. MsRubl

    MsRubl Member

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    ai14.photobucket.com_albums_a329_dragonlw12_graff005.jpg
    ai14.photobucket.com_albums_a329_dragonlw12_graff006.jpg

    cmon guuuys
    crits?
     
  5. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    new to grafiti thread.....

    OH,and next time GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM!
    Thank you
     
  6. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    the fuck outta here with that cumon guys bullshit,
    u didnt crit anyone on the page and expect us to crit u
     
  7. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  8. MsRubl

    MsRubl Member

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    Soooorry.
    duct tape, your A is fantastic
    sketch, I like the contrast on your muffin guy.
    haz-e, sick, but i'd like it more if it was even on the bottom

    :p
     
  9. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    You're killing me smalls, I just want one crit
     
  10. MsRubl

    MsRubl Member

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    Cyto, love the outline and the exclamation point, but the bump on the bottom of the s seems kinda out of place
     
  11. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    First attempt at a one-liner.

    Haze make the L bend the same way as the other letters.keep working on the letters aswell cuz that style looks nice.
     
  12. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    b-b-b-bump to the new page for crits and what not....

    drak-your r looks like an a....
     
  13. MsRubl

    MsRubl Member

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    yeh, bump.
    i like your coloring, drakula,
    and smooth, the only thing i don't love are the colors.
     
  14. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    yo elect thers is to much space betwwen the l and the emake the l bend forward other than that its a pretty sliod piece and i dont really like the right side of ur t somthing just seems off
     
  15. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    dope piece man def not toy
     
  16. Duct Tape & Death Threats

    Duct Tape & Death Threats Senior Member

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    Damn bro, I said I used his style to do my name.
    I never claimed it as mine, and never said I'd paint it. I was bored and fucking around.
    As for you, fix up the L so there's not such a big gap, and the top bar on the T.
    That's fucked.
    Drakula, that one liner is fresh.
     
  17. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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  18. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture167.jpg

    could have used more time and effort but it's on scraps so w/e

    Chump- I like the start, i really feel like that could turn into something with more uniform style to the letters like the AB are nice but the K and S could be more similar.

    Haz-E- Work the lean on the L and maybe a straighter T with the same angle on the extension would be nice.

    Drakula- nice work, though the A kinda get's lost without more definition

    Smooth- feelin all three, the progression one is a tight concept, and the fill on the first seems like a good direction to try/
     
  19. rsakens

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  20. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    thats a dope style
    like the shading technique