Ilikepie- your right and I like your peice


heres a simple
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Yeah, I was doing it from like 1:30 to 2:00 in the morning.... (yeah I sketch slow...) Then I did a better, revamped version of it at school with crayons, but I had to turn in the paper that I did it on

 

I dig your style, Pie.

 

some shit i wanted to try quick, heavy influence from a train car with VIRUS

pie- I love the style and this one looks solid

Cyto- Tare is lookin nice, R seems a bit off on the right leg....

 

I haven't been on in awhile, so I figured I'd drop some crits. Hopefully I'll get to some sketches sometime soon- probably over Spring Break...we'll see...

Czar- On the first one, careful with that K, it is coming pretty close to looking like a R, and I agree with you about the english one- not too fond of it. Try to clean both of them up a bit.
RFI- I like this one for the most part (especially the fill and 3d). The letters are alright, but need a bit of tweaking. The two o's don't look similar enough, but they have the same style and is the third letter an s or an f? This could use a little work also, but other than that, I like it.
Cyto- On your first one, it looks about like you're shying away from overlapping the letters and also they aren't really consistent enough. On your second one, the A has extensions that don't appear in the other letters and they aren't really very consistent either. Keep to the bars until you truly get the structure down on these. Your third one is probably the best of the three. I'd suggest you continue writing TARE unless you truly are becoming bored with the letters.
Pie- I'm diggin' this one. The letters are fresh as well as the colors and fill in the bottom hole of the B. Very nice.

 

That is a K. IT's a KA sketch.
but thanks for the crits people

 

bbBBUMP

VOIS TOOK A STEP IN THE WRONG DIRECTION,
GO BACK TO SIMPLES AN TRY AGAIN

 

ZOF nice job man

 

Lol, thats what I meant. My bad bro.

 

thanks amkasshole i thought you were gonna put me in the collab

 

http://s159.photobucket.com/albums/t144/imronburgandy/?action=view&current=Graff002.jpg

 

im calling bite
waster roller
give me a sec to get that picture

 

http://s159.photobucket.com/albums/t144/imronburgandy/?action=view&current=Graff001.jpg

 

hey i need some crits on my 2 posts i did

 

give cris to get them
swatsticas arent cool

 

Not even, he's been on that style for a while....

 

Might as well bump myself before I leave.

 

waster did it first
if im wrong im wrong but il find the pic

 

WITH ANTE... YOUR IN GOOD HANDS...LOL
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CRITS...PREETTTY WACK PENSTYLE
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CRIIITTTTSSS WHHHAAATTTTT?????????
and bmx, we arent gonna crit your whole photobucket...pick one picture
PIE-doesnt look like you, i think you should go for more of the grimey coloring
exhale-sorry not a fan