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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    rfi- im likin your new steeze
     
  2. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    ante, the extension off the top left seems a bit unnecessary. remove it and it'd be dope
    4saqen- not feelin the arrows on the first 2 throwies, and some of your Ks need work, like 3-5, and the last one
     
  3. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  4. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    ai211.photobucket.com_albums_bb184_dimr_01_exchangeswore.jpg
    heres and exchange with swore
    not done obv im seriously considering moving the extention on the left hand side.
    Dr. Tezer- I like that simple u got brewing
     
  5. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Tezer not rly feelin it ur E's remind me of a guy who writes angst in my area (the lowercase E looks like his lowercase G)
    Dim love the W aint feelin the E or R
    Soek diggin the throws
    Sex i ALWAYS love ur shit
    Anteup not rly feelin the letter but that handstyle is mad fresh
    Satire/Satan i LOVE what u do with the color scheems and the letters seem pretty solid
    Nez im feelin it all but the R
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    crits other then to remove the top spike on the E?
     
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    evade, make your V more Vish, kinna looks like a U, also try not to cover it so much with the tail of your E, but overall im diggin your steeze and the color selection.

    dim, that looks good, but if your gonna have an arrow on one side, you should probably have another on the other side, it kinna looks incomplete without it imo. color it too, see how it looks.

    tezer, im not feeling the T that much, just the angle of the top bar an how it kinna arrows upwards, but its lookin good

    forsaqen im feelin the 2nd last the most, nice colors an i like the points on the right legs of your letters. i like the first ones too, the arrows are cool an a pretty fresh idea for that kinna steeze, but id work on the overall structure, i dont really like the shape of the letters imo.

    sex is that a ceiling light cover? if it is, cool idea. they look good, im diggin the club too, fresh. but i dont like that batman logo lookin mafucker thing comin off the leg of your R.

    anteup, try redoing it without that extension coming off the top left side of the A, its a bit too much imo.

    rsakens, that satire piece is ill, but id fix the T, push it up to the right just a lil bit. and id also fix the R in your satin piece, it leans too much to the left as well

    nez, thats looking great, the only suggestion i have is to make your second E capital as well, having a capital and then a lowercase E in the same piece seems kinna wack to me.

    neamz, that looks good too, but id bring down the right leg of your A a bit so its not mistaken as a P or maybe an O, id also work on your Z, try bringing down the middle bar so its a bit straighter, kinna looks like a wack 3 to me.

    i just critted the whole fucking page, if i dont get at least 3 crits back, im bug the fuck out an go to 12oz
    i fixed up the T, still screwed it up a lil lil bit but whatever gimmie some constructive crits.
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  7. Kraft561

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  8. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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    bumper
    rsakens- lookin good!
    nemzone - sweet style
    sex - i want that! i'll send you can i did a piece on if you send me it :D
    dim - i wanna see a full piece man! clean up the lines and colour it
     
  9. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    bump bottoms!
    Zof not rly feelin it i prefer ur old stuff if u evolved it a bit more
     
  10. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    bumpskies
     
  11. Kraft561

    Kraft561 Member

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  12. JSBiggz

    JSBiggz Senior Member

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    Lock- that looks alot better than your other stuff....your letters are nice and simple....now just take those letters and shift shape em up a bit...and your handstyle needs work
     
  13. Bah Humbug

    Bah Humbug Senior Member

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    i did two sick pieces
    ill post them soon
     
  14. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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  15. roa

    roa Senior Member

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    random/school ish

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  16. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    give a god damn motherfuckin crit if you want one back, it takes one fucking minute outta your pointless fucking day. jesus christ
     
  17. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    bump
     
  18. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    forsaq- dope ass shit son.
     
  19. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    ROAS - I like that first one a lot. On the second one make the a have a hole like the r and o and for the third I would lose the little lines in between the letters.
    SAEK - the first few are my favorites
    TAMK - very rapid prgression good job keep working at it
    EVA - I can tell you are a really good drawer and have coloring skills I guess im just not feeling your style.
    Lock - forget about fills for now. It is a decent start though. I would not write lock of I were you because there must be a million locks.
    Dim - I cant crit you
    mi turno:
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    this is kind of old but I havent really sketched since this so Its actually recent!
     
  20. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    im not saying this to anyone specific but i just looked through the "bigboy" forum and was wtfuck man i am no good at all and then i flip through some random pages of the trusty toy forum and i think...hmm at least im not that bad XD