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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    wow thats really cool


































    no its not.
     
  2. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    thats why were here. we'll all be in the big boy forum one day... except people that dont crit others and want crits back.

    cuz you know, i havent been buggin out over that tonight. (e-sarcasim)

    peor! thank you for the crit, although it was more of a compliment i guess. but yeah, youve got a decent concept on bars, theres just a couple of distortions with the size towards the bottom where it gets bigger than the top, i would make the legs of your P and R a bit straighter so it would flow more. and i would make the bottom of your O not as pointyishish, kinna smoothen it out if ya know what im sayin
     
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  3. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    they get bigger at the bottoms on purpose. its called style :)

    honestly for what you did there wasnt really any crits I could give you other than keep at it
     
  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yeah i was pretty sure you did it on purpose, but i wrote it down anyways in case you didnt. you know, lookin out for ya or something else that sounds motivational. haha

    im gonna try an think of some fresh extensions tonight, cuz i dont really wanna put any on unless there somewhat original.

    for now, its my bomb, been paintin it too, it looks good, but i aint hittin the streets till
    A) its warmer
    B) i have absolutely no drips, im still drippin when i paint with krylin:( cuz i know im gonna be bombing with krylon more often than mtn
    C)i get faster at doin it
     
  5. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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  6. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    New stuff..

    A battle piece against someone(and if you guys think I was at all biting Atlok, sorry, I just like the 3d ways...and was trying it out).
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    Piece..
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    Some Slaps
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    Crits?


    Evade-NIIIICCCEEE, love the style, and all the weird anti-gravity drip effect thing, cool fading too, love it.
    Kraft-Ok, but work on the 3D
    Jetpack-pretty cool, but if you do the bolt effect, it looks cooler with some kind of shimmer or light of it, make it steel looking maybe?
    Ed"Sezer"-Nice and almost like scrawl looking, pretty cool, especially with the color splash
    RFI-NICE, but the upside crosses have been overdone, if you refrain from that, I'd say almost perfect.
     
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  7. JETPACK!!

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    word capo, good call, i colored it green then thought, "hey, i wanna add some bolts" if i had thought it out better it probably would have looked better, just gettin my letters down y'digg

    the first piece, you may wanna bring out the K a bit more, the R is covering too much of the backbone. and i would take off those flat bars on the ends of the K.
    your second piece is better imo, but the P and the O should be straight like the C and the A, it kills the flow heavy. and iunno about those highlights, it should go with a 3d more, id try putting the highlights on the bottom of the letters runnin a bit up the right side, not all the way

    PS i cant see your slaps
     
  8. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    ok like i said first in 13 months.. could be worse i guess

    ai278.photobucket.com_albums_kk105_nemz55_P3270002.jpg

    TAMK - good that ur on simples, would focus too much on fills etc for now bud, try develop ur letters, since i see you got proportion down n shit.

    PEVR - reli like that stylee, always have, tried funkin it up more??

    CAPO, id say work more on simples really, no need for mad fills n 3d for now.. that all just what i think.. uz asked for crits right??
     
  9. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    View attachment 356827

    Crayon style!

    Capo-Keep working
    Peor or Peur? Fix that 3rd letter
    Dim, the leg of the R is coming out of the wrong place
    Ros- Simples are nice
    Nemz-Mindgem misses you :p
     
  10. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Yeah the Capo wasn't originally ment to be straight at the CA, but It turned out that way by accident, it's supposed to all be jumbled.

    And the Ark piece, I really don't like except the 3d

    And do you see the Slaps now?(Do you mean the images are too small, or the image isn't showing up?


    NEM-yup I asked, thanks. :)
     
  11. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    nemz-wow. i was wrong... looks amazing with color bro, keep it up, and i loooove the throwwwwww :)
    capo-simples...
    funerals-nice and simple, looks purty nice :)
    dim-you know i like your work, but the add-ons look waaaay to jam packed. the arrow on the left is to much.
    roa-keep the simples, on the first one make the bars more consistent.
    sake-i dont know anything about throws or i would crit.
    kraft-dont make the o pointy at the bottom.
    tamk-try to move your marker faster, it bled the ink to much, but the simples are nice :)
    evasion- judging by your name its supposed to be eva? but it looks like eua, the colors are nice but the letters are inconsistent.
    pie-the letters look tasty :) maybe an exchange when i get better?

    REMOVED THE ADD-ON.
    View attachment 356828
    CRIT?
     
  12. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I'm doing names right now actually, you write What, right?
     
  13. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    All but the first piece are simples?

    I mean it bends a little, but it's still flat straight blocks
     
  14. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    yes :) or whats.

    and capo, you gotta use the same thickness of bars.
     
  15. Kraft561

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  16. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  17. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Yeah I completely failed on the ARK one, but on the CAPO one, isn't it fairly the right thickness?

    Also I always wonder why you guys tell us this, since most advanced graffiti all the bars and lines, etc are all different widths?
     
  18. SPRAY yoface407

    SPRAY yoface407 Senior Member

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    nemz thats nice
    capo i like the second one sept the bugger on it and the first ones 3d needs some work
    Lock try makeing all letters same size and keep practicing on your tag
     
  19. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    From back in the day negros!
    exchanges!
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    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y158_AlexheartsJennifer_iokp.jpg
     
  20. JETPACK!!

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    ante, that looks so much better without that thing on it. gimmie an e-pound for that.
    lock, stop doing what your doing with your L, dont make the bottom bar go out that far cuz then you have too much dead space above it. fix your K, keep the backbone straight. an dont put the letters are side by side in every aspect like how your doing.
    tare, your A and R are kinna small compared to your T and E, make them wider. and i dont like your R whatsoever, that line you put halfway through the backbone of your R dosent look good, and for the leg of your R keep it going straight down, the hook up into the E kinna looks wack

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