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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    Finally! someone that took crits well and went simple.
    I like it, though it looks like the letters get smaller from left to right. Straighten that shit up, clean up those lines and post it up.
     
  2. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    jetpack- the M might be a lil too thick
     
  3. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    !! Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck I Didnt Even Notice I Forgot To Put An Extension On The K Fuck Fuck Fuck God Fucking Dammit I Just Did It With Markers Too Fuck!!!


    christ dammit, oh well, next sketch i guess..
     
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  4. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    post that shit anyway man, fuck it lol
     
  5. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    I get stoned and fuck up my sketches all the time lawl but I also make some of my best shit while high as well lol
     
  6. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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  7. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  8. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    exhale change your sig, thats fucking gross. the fuck are the parents feeding that kid

    tare, that looks hot bro. i like it a lot better than your other shit. the only thing i dont really like is the courve on the spine of your T, try making it a bit straight an see whatsup with it

    heres my sketch anyways, i like the shading though

    [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6909/tamk10in5.jpg
     
  9. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    The K's bottom kick is too stiff, give it a curve instead of a kink.
     
  10. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yeah, i got lazy on the K and tried to squeeze it in the paper:( oh well, tomorrows another day. thats tonights sketch
     
  11. BaddaBING

    BaddaBING Member

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    Cyto Aka Son1c, I don't think the extensions are wack at all...looks good.


    anyway, let me know what you guys think of my last sketch. went for a much simpler, slightly curvy look. i cut the tops at 45 deg. angles for added flair...or whatever.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w18/ralphwader/dfd.jpg

    i swear i'll comment on your guys' pics later, but i gotta be on my way. peace.
     
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  12. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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    fucking hell what is it and this forum with fucked up sigs
    gah
    ai266.photobucket.com_albums_ii245_aerosol_dreams_AWA.gif
    ai266.photobucket.com_albums_ii245_aerosol_dreams_ohateee.gif
     
  13. Mr. Octane

    Mr. Octane Member

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    bump from the last page
     
  14. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    akel make your inner out line thicker bacue the high light cover it for the most part
     
  15. :RAVE:

    :RAVE: Member

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    disragard the red marks i dropped a slice of pizza on it lol

    octane - i like it exept the yellow force doesnt highlight it the way it should maye if did a fill with it idk

    dyein 2 live - im diggin that last 1

    baddabing - the cut tops flow on the a and the e but not so much on the w n k

    jetpack - i like that k

    cyto - thats nice but ur e is 2 skinny at the top
     
  16. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    id take off those random squares.
     
  17. :RAVE:

    :RAVE: Member

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    yeah i wanted 2 add something n i didnt feel like fuckin with the structure it was simple n i liked it
     
  18. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    bring your letter closer together too.
    and the middle line of your, try to make it come out straight.
     
  19. Desipher

    Desipher Guest

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  20. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    jetpack try taking your own advice before coming on here and giving kids crits like you know what your talking about, please.