onio peel effect goin on with those first two. someone was saying the same thing about AMK awhile back.
a·bys·mal /əˈbɪzməl/ –adjective 1. of or like an abyss; immeasurably deep. 2. extremely or hopelessly bad or severe im assuming this is what mass means
no hate bro, but i honestly dont know how that can read caiser or whatever it may read. i dont even see letters. maybe O's and U's
I was saying i dont think its good enough for the "big boy" thread. And that you have no fucking idea what your talking about.
yo jet u wanna battle? and here are the letters to help you out [Broken External Image]:http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1269/caisyelloworangecopycq6.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/5771/caiser1dk1.jpg thats what i see, connect your letters an itll look a lot better, itll be legible at least. an im not down for a battle, cuz your shit may be illegible, but im not frontin like my shits any good. maybe in a couple days when i find a steeze i like and wanna work on. giganticcrane try not to overlap your letters too much like in your second picture, the S on festival is covered too much imo. on your third sketch id work on your M, the T kinna looks like an H since half your M is small. make the bars a similar width to those of your W and see how it looks something i did earlier, i dont like it, but i dont really hate it either. [Broken External Image]:http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1706/tamk13mk4.jpg
i don't usually jump into other peoples arguments, but i've got to agree with jetpack. your shit looks like you just drew a bunch of pretty lines, regardless of letters. i bet i could spell a hundred different words with that drawing. but i have to admit, legible or not, its attractive to look at.
Wouldnt battle someone posting in the toy forum anyway, waste of time. And did it look like a serious post ilikepie cocksucking fool?
lol, someones taking an internet forum about graffiti with 80% of the people on the website never touched a can before/actually do shit a little too seriously now....
im not beefin you atlok, im just telling you my opinion. you dont need to listen to me. and if your getting uptight over what i say, then you shouldnt listen to me. saves you the gray hair. ill pm you when im confident enough in my own work to battle. but ive wanted to the past couple of days you'll be my first battle
My post was a joke about battling, and i would battle anyone from anywhere any level. Just dont tell me i dont know what im on about raby is too good for the toy forum. Atlok- Take the crits tone down the extensions and extra add ons. Tamk- make the bar om the middle of the A connect normaly not overlap it looks fucking stupid like that. Other than that its getting there. And mr.rosa, zotos, 2zeks, baze you got a link to any painted shit from you?
what kind of bong is that in your avatar? looks dope. i'll battle you if you want. i'd like to battle someone, and im probably a bit more on par with your skill than atlok. he'd slaughter us both in a battle.
i wouldnt count putting up pictures on an intenet forum and having some kids vote on which they think is the most visualy pleasing and not on letter structure(few do) as battle.
no offence jetpack but you are at the graffiti illiterate stage. Atlok is sick as fuck, he has style, flow, and structure.