View attachment 358337 sumthin im tryin 2 develop tips 4 improvment?? n no im not tryn 2 bite sir its just a sketch 4 my blackbook
[Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9946/0331081653tb4.th.jpg I write ZEUS, this is just some random shit as for critss, RAVE, you could try throwing a 3-D on those letters to make em look better and fonone, those letters are nice but you could work on your handstyle a lil bit
ZUEEEESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAI ZUES!! hahahah nice name tip#1 give crits tip#2 make your pic bigger tip#3 your U dosent look like a U, fix that up. nice bomb
i always leave a huge list of crits but the only sketch on his page said he didnt want crits sheesh i cant get away w/o given crits one time i always give them n zeus i like it but ur second dot is bigger then ur first one and yeah fix up the u
Zeus- not bad keep practicing, try using bars maybe. Rave- use bars and dont use any addons yet, also keep all parts of the letters the same thickness. [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b7039db/1/12/QOYRENDG5z_3g8L5wi52kX6Ith98e5Q7.jpg Save, for a battle with i like pie.
Yeah, take your own crits. Use simple bars, no addons. and how many accounts you gonna make, ASEN/SLEDGEHAMMER/Knucks/T-Bur?
Fonone-Lookin good, just clean it up a bit Rave- Use bars to form letters merm1sf- fix the U [Broken External Image]:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2341/img0103ux3.jpg
i said im tryin 2 develop that sketch not redo a whole new one how about sum tips 4 suttle changes i can make n i used bars 2 develop the structure but i ereased them after
Why do you gotta PM me this shit? Oh well, guess someone can't take simple crits. JS- Keep working on it, make all of your letters the same size.
[Broken External Image]:http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/proofmuch.jpg made up? haha
just messing around in school [Broken External Image]:http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4860/throwcaisonexh1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9166/throwcaiseroneia5.jpg
oh lawd....i did not notice.....i thought Atlok was a bad ass name....did you get bored or something?
Atlok- the Case one is nice. The top one akel inspired? [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000001b70b4cf/1/7/7tC5bdL22j-SH55cBUZ7CIRDjDOO4bMh.jpg