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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
yeah advice is what i meant
inchture try using bars, it will help you letters look alot more "normal" just throwing that out there, for information on bars check the new to graff thread. not being an ass just saying its great to help you start out.
word, amkahs almost as big of an asshole as i am. so maybe we think alike. but im pretty sure he's workin on a new, less bar-ish steeze i think.
to be frank, i like my T a lot, adds character to, i wanna make my other letters have a similar steeze, but its not as easy as it was for the T.
and yeah ctso my K is a bit off, i forgot to shadow the bottom of it and i didnt bring down the back bar as much as i should have. but thanks
trick keep your letters straight, some of your letters angled off to the right. and keep your bars the same width as the others, the kick on your leg is too narrow. try to curve your edges too so its not as sharp, unless you wanna go for a blockbuster look.
evade im not really feelein the first steeze, its kinna hard to read. but i like the pink laser beam or whatever going through it, thats ill haha.
your second sketch is a nice example of simples. i love your A, i was trying to work on a lower case a an get it to look like that, but it wouldnt worked, so i went back to capital. im not feeling the angle of your E's either, try to not put the bar through the back of your E if you na'mean. and loose the crown, no one likes them hahaha
fonone, im glad you dont like me, your hate towards me fuels me like gasoline.
good luck bringing me down
it has alot of the lil elements that can make a piece look good but you can tell that you dont have proper fundamental letter skills down yet . . . i saw your simples in the big boy thread and they need some work in my mind . . your on your way but dont go to far into the deep end of teh pool and not know how to doggy paddle . .
jetpack - thats a long ass sig you got there buddy
Trick-if you're freestyling with marker, just use a pencil so you can erase and create straighter lines.
Evasion Of Invasion - i like the top one, n i would like the bottom one if it was just one color
inchture - try simple bubbles smashed together
i didnt like the ' ! ' after i did it.
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you can see where i fucked up on the 's' but its the best i got right now.
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and the letter of the day is:
i know its kinda fucked but i was just fuckn around, NOT LOOKN FOR CRIT
and heres a quick dirty little sketch with some dead markers and too many random things coming out of this tumorous piece of eyesore haha
im a toy, but not a complete toy. I know about biting and all that shit. Also I like all my letters and not going to change an individual letter because i write ahem the word for a reason. Thanks tho
bumping for haze.
Your R looks like Mar's.... I think that's who it is... The guy who was doing his fill like it was 3D and it looked cool... Someone tell me if I'm right.
Amaze.... Unless you have 2 accounts, I'm not very good at catching on to these things....
chill on the extensions go to simples nuff said
it would look better with straight bars and closer together
Atlok- dope as usuall man, i love your style
im feelin the characters as usuall but you went a little crazy with the peice man i was likin your simples way better
Agreed. I like the girls, but the piece looks a little weird. I know this is purely personal preference, but it looks too jagged to me. It doesn't flow.
yo same here. girls hot. peice ehhh. simples are so much better. but the 3d looks fly. to me at least hah
the sketches are kinda fucked
ok i used bars rubbed them out but fucked up the outline its sorta shaky before i outlined it all the letter were sitting on the line anyway's here it is
R is fucked
hey Inchture, i did a super quick tutorial to help you out abit.
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1) Look at how the Letter(s) Flow(s).
2) Use blocks, aslo known as bars to sketch out your letter. Keep them the same width and for now, same lenght.
3) Erase the lines that are NOT needed.
And then you have your finished product
P.S. Stick to pencil for now, dont waste your markers for little simple sketches. plus you can always fix your mistake if its in pencil.
what is wrong with it? i did use bars
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