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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
ive given plenty of crits all throughout this thread
dont over lap the 3d on your letters
holy carp, thats dope!
the only thing i would say is dont let the 3d overlap like he said.
other than that, i love your style.
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did sumthin more blocky. tryin out diff stuff with the f.
i like the 3rd one best.
ok i tried overlapping the letter never mind the shakiness of the pencil
kinda cool, definatly get rid of the upsidedown cross tho..
-cept its not a bad start. make sure you make that e more visable as an E, because it looks alot like a C.
-trip, make sure all the bars are the same size, practice writing 1 Letter at a time untill you find a nice way to draw it. ocne your done this for all letters, try putting it together and fooling around with overlapping.
ref- the top one looks sweet, try making the top bar of the F even bigger to go with the e.
thats not a crit, dont just repeate wat u here..
voise thicken the horizontal bars up on the O, the width is fucked on that S
shits mad shaky too
your letters also gradually get bigger as they progress. keep your letters the same size. the bottoms alright.. but the top needs to be worked on
Theres already an Eskimo from Perth and he's better than you.
use simple bar's for now, rather than the whole bubble approach. make the bottom bar of your L longer. im feelin the U more than the L or D though, with the D you should make the middle open, dont give it a small hole. hopefully you get what im saying
lucids a cool name(lucid dreams are the shit), but having an l and u next to each other can be tricky. as for ur sketch go right back to basics.read the new to graff thread
eskimo pretty sick shit
unless u live by that other dude dont bother name changin
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got mad flicks i'll start with these haah
love the name.
you definetely have a lot of potential.
i think that d's really rad.
but the rest need work.
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The L/U right next to eachother can be very tricky as Sketch said... maybe you should try "LEWCID" or "LEWSID"?
just deleted a whole page of shit, keep your bullshit name beef to pms, not on this thread. and DO NOT ASK FOR CRITS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER. if someones gunna crit u then they will, im gettin sick of seeing shit bumped over 3 or 4 times. its one thing to be at the bottom of the page, its another to just be greedy. i will delete your shit if its a 4th bump.
thanks for the words skeelo how u been nukka?
good to see ya round these parts.
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sor-nice shit, just not feelin the hearts, kinda makes it look gay, no offense
lucid-sick name, just not feelin the last one
ref-lookin aight, may wanna change the r tho idk
pure-post that in the toy tagz thread
you may wanna lengthen the L on the first one, the second ones pretty cool, and the last one just looks a little messy. over all everythings good step up and the name is sick as well
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Perth? Who cares?
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