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caisone
took the crits into consideration

 

dope dope dope CAISER

 

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Crits please, just started out. Trying to keep it simple.

 

atlok -- something's just off about your piece, but i cant put my finger on it

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atlok, looks stiff.
..no flow to it.

 

sample- dope but the p throws it off,
said- how do i fix that?

 

awryt m8, armys gd, fills ma wallet lol.. just no time to do shit as u can probs tell by my shit...

get a wee bump out o it for sum mo crtisizzles lol..

samp1e - im not too keen on it, but mite just be my personal peeves... never been a fan of thickness of lines being inconsitent in a a piece.. and also not a fan of tons of lines cuttin into the letters, a few is ok if thy placed appropriately. other than that its fairly plain.

fools - dont do arrows that come straight out of a letter, thts fugly.. fair nuf if it was an addon or extension, but not at the end of a letter..

atlok - i like it mate. just not too sure about the N, looks too small n squashed up.. also if u huna do stars, get em right, if not they look guff..

jers - love it man, nothin i can say to giv u sum advice.. just keep on keepin on.. simples rock when done right, and u sir do em right..

NOW THATS HOW YA GIVE CRITS U CUNTS WHO DONT CONSIDER IT.. FUCKIN STOP JUST SAYIN 'CRITS'...

peas

 

ALMOST everythin on this page is look freash specially like Atlok

 

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Posted this a while back, got nothin except a 3d.. i still havnt worked on it..

ibomb4kog: a little weird, work on the handsteezys a bit
nemz: solid. no comment.
atlok: yeah i agree, something is off somewhere.. it may be that your bars are different and inconsistent lengths
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samp: p is a little too curved, but it still looks fine.

i dont know how this writing got italicized

 

I FOUND IT !!!!!!!!!!!!! its the connection between the i and the s. still fresh as fuck tho
great job atlok

 

Thanks for the crit man, much appreciated.

 

no worries man.. lil ish i done today.. tryin new shit. 3rd sketch in a year now remember..




on a seperate note... .D.H. -

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theres ur pic posted proper, and i quite like it, simple with sum funk, get sum 3dizzle on it..

 

that top ones sharppp nem

 

drak- nice coloorzz
nemzone- i love that m man
samp1e- nice syle
lol.. uh cant rly crit u cuz i suck but yeah..
advise to help me get better? xD

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crits?

 

very nice Samp !!!
nice for the 3rd in the year Nemz...bring back thta old ish tough

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first sketch in a few weeks..may paint.

 

nem- top ones tight as shit
ibomb- that characters dope, maybe some color?
jam- the venom is pretty good, but as far as the other two, use bars and possibly some three d once you have a good letter form down
mass- sick bannana

 

Mass Appeal - That shit's dope as fuck. I'm diggin that banana dude.

 

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My first real letter, I know i'm a toy but i'm learning, I was told to stick with paper and pencil so here I am learning.

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