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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    letsgo- look at other throwies for inspiration but dont bite them.
    amkrack- you should definitely finish that, its ill.
    spark- work on keeping proportions. as in the s is too fat.
    vois- top simple is nice, keep fucking with simples.
    jetpack- youre definitely progressing, keep doing what your doing. just stop putting those bumps at the ends of the letters.
     
  2. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture225.jpg
    Wonder what my name is. Took 15 minutes in class so it, like most of mine, is a little grimey around the edges and such.

    HOERS- I'm feelin the color scheme and the style only thing i can see is that the R seems
    kinda wide.

    POCS- I like 2,5,7 they seem like they got some potential to be nice pieces, the rest seem like they need to be tweaked and worked on longer to develop properly.
     
  3. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    hoers- im feelin it, but i dont like your E. it seems to narrow to me. your R and S also seem much taller than the rest of your letters. and i know that all those bubble things on my letters look wack:( oh well.
    shane- im not feelin the curve in your H and N. you also covered up too much of your S imo
    pocs- make sure all your letters are legible and not to make them look the same or crazy similar.

    just made the freshest chicken caeser salad. fucking scrumptious.

    heres something without any ugly tumors on it

    [Broken External Image]:http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/473/tank3zt3.jpg
     
  4. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    few i missed
    i bit the c from a local artist, does this still count as bitin, properly? i do it alot when im stuck i take one letter and make the others up myself
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    garbage- is that moers or hoers? the colouring is pretty shady and some of the letters are wack but a little work and it'd make a nice piece
    tech- make the top bit of the n shorter and sort the s out it look a bit dodgy. good simple though although s doesnt suit the rest and id ont like the curve on the h also make bottom bit of h more square to match the rest or vice versa
    jetpack- im lovin that simple
     
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  5. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    letsgobombing, if your gonna bite a letter, try and make the rest flow with it. the letters in your first picture have hard sharp edges, while your C is smooth. try and smooth the other letters or sharpen your C.. id say smooth your other letters
     
  6. Desipher

    Desipher Guest

    theres only one are it says aker but ya i know what u mean will look better when i ink i got a full page of doodles on it i need to ink just to lazy :p
    letsgo: the 8th ones go potential id lose the lil angel wing idea on the p for now might be a good idea later one when u advance
    hoers:looks good
    tech: make ur letters more simple and even out the sizes puportionatly(sp)
    jetpack: sometihng about the T bugs me i think its the little hooks on both sides of the t bar
    spark: loose the curly thing on your a
     
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  7. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    if you saw my other fills you'd be thankful for this one. and what letters are wack?
     
  8. sacwacko

    sacwacko Elite Member

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    this almost looks painted at first glance.
     
  9. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    pocs i agree with the other crits, when your biting
    one letter the rest have to look very similar or els
    e the flow is gone. the throw has similar letters b
    -ut the points of the top corner should be sticking
    off of each letter and the p should not have as
    much gap.
    ^thatones better..
     
  10. crappytheclown

    crappytheclown Member

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    hey everyone. This is my first piece, just wondering what your thoughts are on it. Any negative or positive comments and feedback is appreciated.
     
  11. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Another battle word for a different forum.

    AMK Nice idea.Looks good so far.
    Spark Dope simple.Got a nice flow but definately lose the swirl on the A.
    Tank thats a nice simple too but I'd say make the the bottom bar thats kicking out of the K, bigger.
     
  12. Doctor Lucifer

    Doctor Lucifer Senior Member

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    Damn raby... I love your style. Wanna hook up an exchange?
     
  13. NAIK_SHOES

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  14. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    jhahahahahahhahaha make it simple man, thats nothing but a bunch of lines and colors.

    M A K E Y O U R L E T T E R S S I M P L E L I K E T H E S E O K ? J U S T L I K E T H E O N E S O N Y O U R K E Y B O A R D. kthnx.

    or you can read the new to graff thread
     
  15. Doctor Lucifer

    Doctor Lucifer Senior Member

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    NAIK SHOES- go a little bit simpler.
     
  16. JETPACK!!

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  17. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    dude u need to do more than one extension if ur going to do them or it looked like u have developed more on one letter.
     
  18. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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  19. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    cool beanz, check back in sometime tomorrow an ill have thrown those suggestions into a sketch. i like the whole bigger to smaller idea, although id probably get a lot of dead space at the bottom of my letters. and im not sure on the drop shadow being on the bottom, but ill try it anyways. right now im battling with the K, it always fights with me dammit!

    cheers for the crits ctso

    thanks marone
     
  20. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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