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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    jet pack just do 50 pluss quick sketches and i garuntee ur structer will change slighty every time, then post it up
     
  2. lord patrick

    lord patrick Senior Member

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    some stuff, pat let me on to maybe get some crits. if all is well ill see if i have any advice for anyones ish.
    ungrs ego died, im a toy
     
  3. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    Vois- getting better I guess, but everything I see from you looks the same. I'm not saying that its time to step up to the next level really yet, but you might step outside the box a bit and try a few new things. On the first one, the S is a bit skinnier than the other letters and the second one is looking pretty nice for what it is. IMO, you should try some new things though.

    People- I like it for the most part. Your first E is kinda confusing to pick out and the letters altogether don't have a great flow. They're all different sizes and leaning different ways. I think you get it though.

    Mass- I just saw this earlier on 12 oz. Very fresh. I'm definitely diggin' it.

    Here's a little something I did at school today in English. I'm still playing around with names for those of you who have noticed I've been writing different things all along. I think I might stick with this name though.
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  4. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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    Ungr - ur first 2 rnt tht gr8. the monster one is ok. the 1 after is same (fix tht n its 2 fat). the red one is nice tho, wuld look real dope with a consistent fill

    Jest - gud start tho if u r going to hav a vanishing point it usually helps if we cant c it. i wuld suggest u move it up and to the left or sumthing and then cut off the lines b4 they actually get all the way to the point. u dig? ;)
     
  5. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    new rule-post picsif you want the right to talk shit
    t-bur-im ready for that battle when you are
    unger-that u is killing the piece dude ide take off the big kicker like thing in the bottom left
    b squared-too many dots on the highlights
     
  6. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    b^2- Looks pretty good but I'd move the T closer

    Unger- Idk, seems like each has some bad and some good parts to it, try making each part look more alike on them and they'd be much better. Also the first one has the N as the top letter, and the G in the second is too stretched out and distant from the other two letters.
     
  7. lord patrick

    lord patrick Senior Member

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    yo haze which kicker are talkin bout?

    Jest-shits clean, i like the E & S, but the t looks a tad awkward (top bar, right side). idk ur style but id cut that 3d back to let background through.

    vois- the last ones got potential, fix up the inside of your O. ur 3d isnt that bad either.
     
  8. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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  9. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Those last two are finally going somewhere :D
    *At Vois*
     
  10. DEAR

    DEAR Senior Member

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    fuckin sweet, 420 in canada is the bomb
    i hope to see some 420 peices/ prods the day after
     
  11. t-bur

    t-bur Senior Member

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    Evasion, starting to like your stuff.

    Anyone down for an exchange?
     
  12. Mr.Poosk

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  13. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    ah bump no crits for Mr.Apfer.

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    wooo..hold awn Mr.Poooosk...chill down...simpels..simpuls...simplz..whatever you wanna call em you NEED to do before you get good.......get down your basic letters...you get good....check VOIS...prime example of a good simple :D
     
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  14. I<3Trendz

    I<3Trendz Senior Member

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  15. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    BBbbumpp.

    Trendz- I'm really feeling the simple background.

    Mass- The letters are so unique and fresh, I really like the feel of the AIDS piece.
     
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  16. sInk.dIs.

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  17. kroc_oner

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  18. Super-Trooper

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    cyzo- you know not to ignore Kroco onerl, its fresh i digg it.
    kroc-simples.
    sink- Hard to read but i see the letters, maybe tone it down a little.
    vois- Keep it up, the bottom one isthe one to stick with.
    Mass- Its banging i rate your style alot man.
    Poosk- Use a tissue next time.
     
  19. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  20. littlerocky

    littlerocky Senior Member

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    cyz i dig that shit soooo hard..so funky.
    zofone i liek where your goin with the style..just not quite there yet.. but still fresh none the less
    so i dont post without a pic..
    mugs throw..bad camera whatever..crits?..street legit?
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