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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Now, now, no need to take the internet so seriously. And I don't even live close to Boulder, guess again. :)
    And Mexicans are afraid of the snow.
     
  2. ghost city

    ghost city Senior Member

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    awright got my resize on, says avone blah blah blah

    ai296.photobucket.com_albums_mm168_drokter_scan0001.jpg

    ai296.photobucket.com_albums_mm168_drokter_scan0002.jpg uhh so yeah fucked up the drop shadow on the E

    ai296.photobucket.com_albums_mm168_drokter_scan0003.jpg

    crits or suggestions?
     
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  3. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Looks like ANME, AXMNE and AMNE. Work on individual letters.
     
  4. ghost city

    ghost city Senior Member

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    i see the amne in the first, but not axmne or amne in the others, where'd you see the x in the second one?
     
  5. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    thye line goin throuh the A's leg makes an x... try seperating your letters (haha im totally not doing what i say but w/e) and try to make all the bars the same size and awoke does that say haste or maste (jw) and i cant really crit it cause its wicked blurry
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    crits? and i know ive got a shitty color selection... it looked better in my head haha and this is kinda funky/wierd but i had some time on my hands and wanted to do something different oh and the d got cut by the scanner
     
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    make each letter seperate. it makes it look better and easier to read.
    awoke, do some simple letters man, i can't read your piece
    maste, i have no idea what your first letter is. it looks decent, but get rid of the loopy things and make them more bar-ish.

    this any better from the first? i think it is.
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  7. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    atlock, i like ur shiz chief, just think u should move away from doin so many seperate bar in a piece. try make single letters with the same style... get me??

    tank i like that 2, tried cracks yet??
     
  8. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i tried cracks on another piece, but i didnt post it.. didn't come out as well as i liked. but it was better than the one you saw. i went overkill on the holes and cracks haha. my next sketch will have cracks for ya buddy
     
  9. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    I like the simples.
     
  10. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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  11. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    Reason To-Shine Senior Member

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  13. Desipher

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  14. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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    why r u posting in the toy thread?

    thats sicc
     
  15. Desipher

    Desipher Guest

    cuz im not that good
    ya i still got alot to learn
     
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  16. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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  17. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    awoke...thats pimp, maybe just settle it down a bit on the colours..or go even funkier.

    ghost, separate your letters, it looks like popsicle sticks laid together by a 3 year old.

    same thing goes for you maste, right simple idea, just need some separation from your letters

    Jetpacks got the right idea, nice and simple, just make sure your letters are the same width

    nocan, lost the arrow, nice grungy style though.

    and just to show yall bawk aint dead...

    a sketch for my boy 2time...says time...word, crits? keep sketchin

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  18. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    oh and Desipher thats pretty hype....maybe youre trying to do to much? i think i critted everyones work on like 3 pages back...or im just tripping..fuck it
     
  19. sir.one

    sir.one Moderator

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    its...not...

    the letters are clouded, the addons are misplaced and sloopy that ruin the flow of the piece.
     
  20. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Next time... I use a ruler... Its rough, its kinda lopsided but what ever. I'll take another swing at it tomorrow afternoon with a pencil and ruler.
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    Tricks; Colour scheme is amazing, really pops well.
    Decipher; Your too hard on yourself, but I can see you going really far because of that.
    Jetpack; Love where that simple is going.