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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Mr Tasty

    Mr Tasty Banned

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    fine then no crits..let it just sit ther
     
  2. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    one more bump for crits

    camer- fresh as always, i just dont like that box part in the a
    reign- nice simp
    desipher- im always diggin ur style
     
  3. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    i think in the calorz one
    it would look better if the c was a little taller than the a it just looks like one line with a black line through it
     
  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    tasty, personally i think the corners are too sharp and its all over the place. the S seems too low and im not feeling the A. the whole thing seems too crowded to me.

    haze, you really need to break outta this mental rut bro. thicken up your bars a bit, and connect the two bars on your M without that extra bar, i feel it's un-needed(sp) your C looks similar to atloks... only better.

    wanna do an exhange hazy? maybe that'll break you outta your rut.. it looks like you dont have a choice, ive already started your piece.. you dont need to do one for me though
     
  5. Spark391

    Spark391 Senior Member

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  6. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    i want to

    A) bump my own shit with a little bit of yellow and get crits cuz im selfish and needy
    B) give props to nemz and Jetpack for keeping a solid head on their shoulders, and props to the G in Jetpacks sketch, its simple and fresh
    C) give big daps to ras (yes i still call you ras) due to the fact that ive watched you grow into a mini-beast of a writer lately
    D) say wuttup to Haze for a fresh R and a simple nice style to start with, i think your using too many long vertical bars, trying bending everything a bit more, throwin some doo-dads in and shit..i dunno
    E) say mr tasty is still keepin it real...although id love tos ee a coloured finished sketch
    and F) fuck yalllllllllllll

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  7. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  8. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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  9. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    imo, simples are sexier than wildstyles. unless you actually know how to do it. but the majority of toy wildstyles... suck.

    simples FTW.
     
  10. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    you good it all wrong
    calm down man and dont start another weak internet beef
    first off all your just as toy as i am one so thats why we posting here right?
    so keep calling me toy i dont care i know my place but it looks like you dont your few mounts ahead of me and coming up with shit -your in no pace to tell any one who is good or bad -
    lol i am doing this shit for a few years now not saying that because that let me look better it whold be the oposive
    i am still toy
    on here its because to show you that i know about graffiti i can teel whats good or bad believe it or not
    i know were i am standing in here & know that you and a few others are alot better but this is not what matters all i was telling you is that i like your style and if you keep working on it
    and clean up some shit your will be about to post in to experience section soon
    if you don't like complements fuck of than
     
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  11. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://www.tinypic.ws/files/w0nmnymf3mgfqdo7afbp.jpg
    New name...... one of the first sketches...crits?
    Jetpack- your simples are sick... you paint any yet?
    Maso- the simple looks good but the 3D in the M is way more dramatic than in the rest of the letters...
     
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  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yeah, if i can draw it, i can paint it. but im not gonna post any pics until i have ZERO drips. im nearly there, but i havent gotten out recently. i wanted to get out today, but i cant decide between my practice wall nowish, or a yard of school buses tonight. i havent painted that name or those simples yet. so im thinking the practice wall, but i need weed for the walk.
     
  13. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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  14. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    ha ha just do it ;)
     
  15. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  16. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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  17. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    that is soooo nice ! ^

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    Exchange with LUMOS..has to be the hardest word iv ever wrote.
     
  18. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Didnt think about that, I'll just pound away at it without a ruler.
    The first letter is actually a G, I write Geski, the I without a vertical does look a bit out of place.

    Thanks for the advice. I'll keep working on it.
     
  19. MUSEone

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  20. Baer One

    Baer One Member

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    maso smooth out your lines and i like the M but the #'s are kinda toy-ish
    and make your 3d go all one way you have some going up and some going down