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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture261.jpg

    Muse- I like those but they have a few 3D issues.

    Jetpack- I agree tone down the inlines and tab stuff and it's be nice, I think leave some but shorten others.

    Jet- Throw and simple are my favorites, the others look a bit off or something.
     
  2. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    right, i've bin lookin slowly through this thread for a while now. and i see people sketch and post, how ever, YOU! (soulja boi) just dont post flicks. just do comment such as do simples, work on ur letter stucture, go to the new to graff thread, year that's dope, blah blah.

    you post count doesnt make u a better writer, posting flicks does and that how u get better, trust me i've bin there so have other people.

    so if u want to be as good as people in your sig, i think, no i kno that u should post flicks and flicks.

    so go, go and fuckin sketch, i want to see ur pencil sooo small form sharpening it soo much, and u have used sooo much paper that the amazon rainforest is all burnt down!
     
  3. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    I'm still pounding away at simples. I really like this one's shape, I think I'm going keep messing with it.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/3948/geski8zm5.jpg

    Hint; I agree with mass, that 3rd picture is easily the best.
    Reign; It's clean, but I dont like it as much as the other style.
    It feels kinda chunky with the lines inside the letters bringing more attention to the extensions. Lighten it up by reducing the extensions and taking out those lines.
     
  4. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    geski ~that i looks like a P, but it has potential maybe throw in some highlights next time to brighten it up or something.
    Vois~ i like that fat letters better than alot of your others, keep working with that some more
    MASO~ I have no idea what it is but im not a big fan of that yellow one. the throwie has some potential

    last night:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3847/herbnsimpen7.jpg

    and a random sticker i made last nite too lol i think its kinda cool not a big fan of the hands though....
    [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/250/scarystickerqh5.jpg
     
  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Ballin, i cant really find much to not like in it... except for the guys little hand pointing to his o face.... and that e look kinda like a sore thumb in all the ballerness haha but what do i know? not a lot. But over all i think its pretty bad ass and think it would come to life with some color.
     
  6. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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  7. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    if your going to make the letters that uneven i would make all the edges look jagged like the had been chizeled away or broken off and make sure the 3d matches the breaks when you do.
     
  8. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    both of em are throws.
     
  9. opte one

    opte one Senior Member

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  10. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    lopte one- lose the extensions
    Herbn- simpler
    Saek - simpler
    Geski - lookin good
    Vois - looks nice
    Jet - Hot shit
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    crits?
     
  11. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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  12. nysd

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    thanks for the crit, but really? im just going for nice big bubble letters nothing complex or advanced.
     
  13. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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  14. PabloESKObar

    PabloESKObar Senior Member

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    Dude's right, that shit's pretty wack son. Try some keyboard simples.
     
  15. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    thats the spirit man..take no notice of the jerks on here...just think fuck em...cos if you keep doing the simple shit..youll be saying " who sucks now jackass " whrn you have a fly ass style. ;)
     
  16. seywhat

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    evade- im really fuckin diggin that, only if the e wasnt so long:(
     
  17. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Bumpo for more, evasion says simpler any other advice?

    Muse- yeah sorry i realize that i meant the bottom one though.
    Leski - that does look alot better than the last keep workin with it
    Evade- thats pretty dope
     
  18. ghost city

    ghost city Senior Member

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    evade- looking damn nice, i dunno about that e though, its alot bigger then the rest and it doesnt have a white part like the other letters
    herbn- looks pretty good your e kind of doesnt flow with the rest though, maybe a normal straight uppercase E would fit in better?
    cept- got potential I think but lose the extensions and make the letters the same, not like the little e and c thrown in
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    crits?
     
  19. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    tgc-i'm kinda feeling the direction it's going, but you might want to make sure the bars are consistant and that it's maybe a bit more readable
    herbn-E and B are pretty wack, but you're getting the basics down pretty well at least. i also kinda dig the teeth on the character
    avone-not feeling the O or E, but it definately has potential. keep working at that one.

    same sketch i posted yesterday, but i sort of fixed the E. crits?
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  20. tgc!mtown

    tgc!mtown Senior Member

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    thanks moze im glad someone finally gave some crits. and as for crits on yours i would say work with some bars but not bad