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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    it's actually all bars besides the tops of the M and E, but i see what you mean.
     
  2. tgc!mtown

    tgc!mtown Senior Member

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    ^^ ha sorry man i shoulda been more specific but thats what i was noticing
     
  3. .Miles.

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  4. ghost city

    ghost city Senior Member

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    not really thats looking pretty sick already. all i have to say is put a dope colour scheme in that bitch and it'll be bangin
     
  5. AZTEKA

    AZTEKA Senior Member

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  6. .Miles.

    .Miles. Member

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    yea if ur talkin about me then ur right.....and as far as other people they are gettin better too......its dopee as fuckkkk...and thanks for the crit ghost
     
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  7. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture268.jpg
    Imagined this in the drive thru, BAAAKED RIGHT NOW!

    ANTi- I like it a lot, maybe add some of the lines to the top bar of the T

    MOeS- Nice work man, have you tried using the top part of the M and E for the O and S but smaller?

    AVONE- Nice color combo imo, feelin it except the top of the O

    EVADE- looks fresh, I like how you kept the two white parts
     
  8. ghost city

    ghost city Senior Member

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    vois loving the symetry, maybe try to have the bottom line up and be evener. good and simple overall though
     
  9. .Miles.

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  10. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    BUMP page ender

    ANTi- ya that makes it look way better for some reason...nice
     
  11. .Miles.

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  12. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    buuump. and anti, i'm feeling all that except the A.
     
  13. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    If I could get my fucking symmetry down I think this could be pretty dope.
    Pen sketch turned test for my ultra thin turned all coloured.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/1007/geski10um7.jpg

    Moes; The M and E go together, and the O and the S go together. Change up the O and S to better fit with the M & E, overhaul the O, its a mad flow killer.

    Vois; You have a strange style man, try making the 3D shorter or just give it a simple drop shadow.

    Anti; The only letter I dont think fits is the T. The A-n-i all fit together really nice but the T seems at odds with them, Maybe its crossbar is a little to round?
    I dunno, over all I like it's style though.
     
  14. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    id say make the i spaced out, and make the dot on it smaller. keep the letters the same size, they got tinier and angled up more towards the end. and in the top right of your k, you forgot the cubes, and it looks kinda.. fucked

    other then that, its good
     
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  15. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Thanks, I've been working hard at it.
    Maybe fourth times the charm, I'll give it one more shot tonight.


    Edit, no need for a new comment. I'll work on the I and K a bunch.
     
  16. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture269.jpg

    just did a couple more f'in around, new Tul markers are workin out

    Geski, I like where that one is going but the I is still throwing it off a bunch.
     
  17. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    understandable, not one of my best drawings.

    anyways, new post. wast trying to write retna, but forgot the n.

    ai24.photobucket.com_albums_c22_xmm89_Photo_0010.jpg

    the exploration on the letter n.

    ai24.photobucket.com_albums_c22_xmm89_Photo_0011.jpg
     
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  18. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    the 2nd 3rd and 4th one of hints, i think thats his name, is legit. i like that blockletterz one , with the rock cracks.
     
  19. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    vois, i'm digging the first one's 3D, but not so much the letters. the second one's got goot letters, but it's sort of sloppy.
    nocancontrol, the R looks kind of like an A, but i really dig that style. also, if you're writing retna, there's already a really well known writer from LA (from MSK) that writes RETNA. not saying you should change it, just letting you know.