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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. freakeenyc

    freakeenyc Senior Member

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  2. freakeenyc

    freakeenyc Senior Member

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  3. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    its been more than 30 minutes, i already finished mine but swivel hasn't even come on on since then,

    this is my entry

    [Broken External Image]:http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0013.jpg
    crits?
     
  4. Kre8

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    freakeenyc i really like the falling one.

    ai291.photobucket.com_albums_ll298_kre8paint_selchar_1.jpg
    okay before anybody says it, yeah i bit the letter structures of the green one from a generator but the rest is all me.
    i dont really do characters,..
    thoughts?
     
  5. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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  6. glyce

    glyce Senior Member

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    ai22.photobucket.com_albums_b320_grungrocker_soank003_1.jpg

    freakeenyc- the stuff in the first pic is looking pritty good, the last one is kind of sloppy though
     
  7. emel

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    Yeah, and cats been rockin that R(similar) for at least a decade before fezat.........he didnt create the letter....im not saying its unorifinal caz fezat is dope as fuck but you cant call that a bite......idiot..
     
  8. atlok7

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  9. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    SOANK- dosent look bad at all. watch the curve around the O, its a bit edgy, smoothen it up. and i think your letters overlap just a little bit too much. try to overlap half of the first bar rather than the whole bar.

    KRE8 - do simples man, thats the best way to start off. biting is a really bad habit to get into. workin on your simples an tryin to build your own steeze is the way to go.

    BIZAR - im not feelin the sharp edges at all. you should put holes in your B, A and R.

    FREAKYEENYC - not feelin the fill. the letters look good though. although the fill an green outline takes away from them imo.

    ATLOK - loose the crown, an the verticle bar on your I is too thick. personally i think the I is ugly as hell.

    been a while since i posted a sketch.. got lazy.

    here ya go
    [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4405/12kd5.jpg
     
  10. hazetheone

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    i haven't been able to draw for weeks
    ai32.tinypic.com_2e1alja.jpg
    cais-get a normal sharpie and do a black forcefield then a colored one i think your edges would look a little better
    reign-keep those simps coming man very dope
     
  11. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    BUMP!!

    Soank - round the bottom of ur K more to match the other letters and also round the right of ur O aswell

    bizar- work on those handies

    kre8 - simples

    Camer feelin it all except the top of the E and C, the C looks to much like an E

    Reign - Good simples rly solid not feelin the top on the N tho

    Cais - the I looks WAY to big ruins the piece
     
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  12. atlok7

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    yeah it wasnt finished, i did a backround thats why there isnt a force field
     
  13. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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    i finished mine in like 5 min but i had to wait so i can get a whole bunch at the same time cuz i only get 20 pix messages a month.......

    im uploading it now.....


    and wow u just took an old piece and wrote "justin is a punkass bitch" in thhe shittiest handstyle ive ever seen
     
  14. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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    ^^this 1s a freestyle wit a blue pen red pen black pen and orage highlighter it says dives...... i thought it deserved this thread tho

    Evasion- i think u should make a skinny part on the "S" cuz to make it kinda disrupts the flow
    Haze- i think u should take out the bottom turn out of the "R" cuz it looks like a "B" kinda
    Jetpack- i think u should make the arrows connected to the letters... mabe make a thin bar going up right next to the letters than an opening at the end.... i dont kno how to explain it
    Atlock- its alreadt been said but the "I" is too big
    Glyce- i think u should use bars
    Kre8- no offence but ur making my eyes bleed..... simples


    now crits on mine!!!
     
  15. Bizzaro

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    KAPLOW! bizar i rock it wit the E and bettah lol jks
    ai227.photobucket.com_albums_dd49_Bizzaro_album_bisar13.jpg
    quickie before bed
    Soank - round the bottom of ur K more to match the other letters and also round the right of ur O aswell

    bizar- work on those handies

    kre8 - simples

    Camer feelin it all except the top of the E and C, the C looks to much like an E

    Reign - Good simples rly solid not feelin the top on the N tho

    Cais - the I looks WAY to big ruins the piece
     
  16. JETPACK!!

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    bump

    lol.
     
  17. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    lol i got lazy wat can i say
     
  18. Soboe!

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  19. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    im pretty sure he changed his name to eamer. other than the obvious two E's.. look at the handsteeze

    looks good though eamer/camer i like those E's. there funky. but the other letters dont really suit it as much. they look too empty compared to them
     
  20. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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    bottom page bump

    ps. shit i thot that said EAMER.... now i get it.... but it still looks like EAMER