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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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    Mass Appeal- first one dope..the red n black.
    the one with the 50 cal dope as fuck

    visk - looks dope.
    kils - way dope. if it was me i would move the letters a lil closer. but still way chill as is. like where the word one is off the S.
    aloe - not feelin the E.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/7541/facezd5.jpg
    dont know what to do with the O. crits?
     
  2. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    yo son thats a gay ass name
     
  3. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    lmao, oh roolete with your mad computer skillz
     
  4. Bizzaro

    Bizzaro Senior Member

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    crit me dammit
     
  5. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    if you say so... Your a toy, happy?
    jk keep away from such chunkiness and if your tryin to rock a simple make the S normal
     
  6. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    cool stuff guys

    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3047_2451248002_56d5f4bcc7.jpg_a4f0a23c50a330cf1bf56cae6c33a893.jpg
    no color lol
     
  7. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    bring out the R more, its too far hidden, drop that A, its not working nor ever will, and the E is pretty good but my taste doesnt like E, stir the pot till you create some better tasting dopesauce, hope this helps, if not tell me
     
  8. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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    you got anything to say about mine soboe? haha
    the o is whack i hate it but dont want to change name.
     
  9. SWIV3Lone

    SWIV3Lone Senior Member

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    CRITS ON MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please????
     
  10. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    work on letter structure, it will look a lot better, and dont add faces to your letters until you know you can pull it off,

    P.S. im trying to give REALL crits actualy telling people what to fix and whatnot cause those gay crits like "its dope" or "i love the letters and colour keep it up" dont help us progress.
    SO EVERY WRITER IN THIS FORUM needs to give BETTER crits telling people what the fuck to fix and what doesnt look good and give them some examples if needed
     
  11. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    Work on the simples again kid, just keep its simple and over time(wont happen in a month or two) you will devolpe style
     
  12. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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  13. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    ok^

    here is some quicky
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    bump that good shit up :)
     
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  14. kaze!

    kaze! Member

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    Stim - Make the a the same size.. or do something else with it. not feeling it. And yeah, bring out the R.

    And whoever was doing those shitty "pen freestyles".. do simples.

    ai170.photobucket.com_albums_u258_skaa_bucket_prkonesketch.jpg

    I should probably get rid of the drips, but i need crits on the letters and flow plzkthnx.
     
  15. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    dont bump your shit the same page. an if you actually wanted crits then give some out an dont copy other peoples crits an front like its yours. christ.

    perk, i like that steeze, add some 3D onto it an fix up the kick of the leg a bit. the rounded bottom should be more like the kick of the R.

    last bump, i havent gotten any crits, just a couple cheesy compliments
     
  16. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    thats why this thread sucks, jetpack. :p

    I would remove the arrows or make them look more like extensions and less like an arrow going through your piece. Other than that, I don't know. Your simples are reaching top-notch, bro.
     
  17. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    I agree.Jetpack you've improved alot since you first came on here.Apart from losing the arrows I would say just bring down the hole in the R a little more.
     
  18. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i wanna put my shit in the big boy thread. ill get clowned, but if it helps me improve im down for a clownin.

    i like having arrows on my simples, im gonna find an extension that works with them. im gonna make the loop on my R better in my next sketch. made it kinna small. thanks guys.

    oh yo mar, did you see the roll call in the toy pieces? i got you down
     
  19. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    yeah bro! thanks man. :D

    Don't go to the big boy thread, they won't give you crits and just ignore you. Not saying your simples arent good enough, just most of them over there are assholes, haha.

    You have to have super-dope fills and arrows everywhere to get by in the Big boy thread, hahaha.
     
  20. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Lol thats true. I never do complex pieces and i never use arrows but I think my stuff is good enough for the big boy thread.But when I post it it either gets ignored or dissed.Oh well just keep posting here.