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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
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haze-rapes, but like atlock said c needs work
nez- you need to fill in those negitive spaces with positive. and kill the extentions
atomic-slow down, go back to basicklee a littlle, and you can barely see the k, idk, mist just looks wierd.
Damn, attie! You've come a long way in just a couple of days as far as structure goes, man. Keep this shit up. ILL.
SEX! You're back! <33
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Rots- loving the throws
Ill-dope handstyle now add some color to that piece
Garbage- try doing a darker 3-d
Haze- make the C bigger and less like a G, and maybe do something to the E, i do kinda like it though
as for my toy shit, this is my attempt at a more technical piece
dont fuckin write zeus hahaha
theres like 2 billion dude who write that
the E sucks.
bump for crits
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somthing wierd, yeah i know start with bars but nothing i made that way looks decent yet so im not showing anyone
NEz: great 3d and use of arrows
your letters look too soft and innocent, make em look hard and aggressive...
care to elaborate?
What he's trying to say is
It's not hiphop enough, add arrows.
lol i was jus thinking that
maybe an extra 5 or 10
Nez, stay with your simple letter structure it looks like the arrows are just forced to make it more wild. not every piece needs arrows and wild connnections and shit to make it dope. dont force it. but your letter structure looks pretty good and the coloring is dope.
keke, dont worry about whether your bars look good or not post a bar pic up. they might not look good becuase your doing something wrong. post one so you can get some advice, because bars are essential shtuff.
sex, it looks dope.
zeus i like what your going for but using graphpaper is kinda cheating, walls dont come with straight lines drawn on them. but the structure looks pretty good.
Atlok, your coloring is dope and its obvious, but maybe its just me but i dont like your letter structure at all. too haphazzard and chunky, maybe its just me but i dont feel any flow in your piece.
havent posted on here since fall, something i did lately in class, any thoughtS?
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exchange wiff rotz
a7 steak sauce
exchange pieces with me
im fixing to go cop a squat and draw something so have it by tonight
ah this is all madness! ha thanks man. yeah i can do up an exchange. wht do u write now??
omg cais, i wanna exchange<333 orly?? e-sex. /jock /dickride /jockingdickrider.
hahah, i kid. yo, PM me the terms for our next paint battle.
no mo m
im actually almost done i just have to erase and color
new- i dont like all the random shit
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