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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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  2. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    rots-rapes
    haze-rapes, but like atlock said c needs work
    nez- you need to fill in those negitive spaces with positive. and kill the extentions
    atomic-slow down, go back to basicklee a littlle, and you can barely see the k, idk, mist just looks wierd.
     
  3. SCIEnce802

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  4. MarOne...

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  5. merm1sf

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2222/img3257mc0.jpg
    Rots- loving the throws
    Ill-dope handstyle now add some color to that piece
    Garbage- try doing a darker 3-d
    Haze- make the C bigger and less like a G, and maybe do something to the E, i do kinda like it though

    as for my toy shit, this is my attempt at a more technical piece
     
  6. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    dont fuckin write zeus hahaha
    theres like 2 billion dude who write that
     
  7. sex without condoms

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  10. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    your letters look too soft and innocent, make em look hard and aggressive...
     
  11. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    :confused::confused::confused:care to elaborate?
     
  12. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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    What he's trying to say is





    It's not hiphop enough, add arrows.
     
  13. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    lol i was jus thinking that
    maybe an extra 5 or 10
     
  14. Scare2

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    Nez, stay with your simple letter structure it looks like the arrows are just forced to make it more wild. not every piece needs arrows and wild connnections and shit to make it dope. dont force it. but your letter structure looks pretty good and the coloring is dope.

    keke, dont worry about whether your bars look good or not post a bar pic up. they might not look good becuase your doing something wrong. post one so you can get some advice, because bars are essential shtuff.

    sex, it looks dope.


    zeus i like what your going for but using graphpaper is kinda cheating, walls dont come with straight lines drawn on them. but the structure looks pretty good.


    Atlok, your coloring is dope and its obvious, but maybe its just me but i dont like your letter structure at all. too haphazzard and chunky, maybe its just me but i dont feel any flow in your piece.

    havent posted on here since fall, something i did lately in class, any thoughtS?

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  16. hazetheone

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    a7 steak sauce
    exchange pieces with me
    im fixing to go cop a squat and draw something so have it by tonight
     
  17. atlok7

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    ah this is all madness! ha thanks man. yeah i can do up an exchange. wht do u write now??
     
  18. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    omg cais, i wanna exchange<333 orly?? e-sex. /jock /dickride /jockingdickrider.

    hahah, i kid. yo, PM me the terms for our next paint battle.
     
  19. hazetheone

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    CAER
    no mo m
    im actually almost done i just have to erase and color
     
  20. Cin123

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    new- i dont like all the random shit