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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    ahh. ic. i wonder why i searched pictures of "cracked concrete" on google images then... i guess its a mystery.
     
  2. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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  3. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    give crits. get rid of those bubbles. your letters get bigger as they progress. dont fill it until your structure is much better, or at least till your fills get better. your just wasting your markers and it distracts people looking at it from finding the small things that would help you improve the most. especially a gray fill

    bump
     
  4. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    what jetpack said.
    give em to get emmmm
     
  5. CharmTwo

    CharmTwo Member

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    Cheers Jetpack. Loving the "Rasek". I would be well proud of that. Put in on a wall :)
     
  6. shiva - the destroyer

    shiva - the destroyer Senior Member

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    charm, i like that one way more than the rest. and you can leave the C a little bit taller than the rest.
    you could use help-lines to line it up at the top.
     
  7. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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  8. shiva - the destroyer

    shiva - the destroyer Senior Member

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  9. CharmTwo

    CharmTwo Member

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    esco 93, start off in black and white is a good idea, i can see how my colours are distracting people from helping me, keep your letters at even heights when they're meant to be at even heights. Practice filling in your shadows better. all in all though i like your general idea.
     
  10. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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    thanks jetpack but uhh is there anyway to make my structure better like ant techniques
    and charm i think you should lose all the extra shit goin on inside ur letters an work on the actual style of the letters...thx 4 the crits
     
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  11. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    Charm-the letters are dope but i really love the fill
    Vandal-really dope man
    jetpack-dope
    esco-dont like the fill
    some thing i did its in portugues it says dinheiro
    [Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4707/88nt0.jpg
    CRITS PLEASE
     
  12. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    sky i love that style i like to practice that style to but that isnt bad jus keep workin on it but im likin it ;)
     
  13. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    umm i'm loving the letters, good example of developed simples. more like this
     
  14. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    sky, i wouldn't put the I in the hole of the D, plus it flows the wrong way. and i wouldnt wrap things around your letters. like the top of your R and D. keep it up though.

    vandal, drop the crown. it's done right. but you still cant rock it. i'd widen the middle bars on your W too.

    and esco, i would work on smoothening out your lines. take a sheet of paper, and draw a bunch of half-circle lines and circles. when your circles are smoother, try another sketch. your O and the loop of your R will look a lot cleaner and smoother. i'd also try to bring the bottom half of your C up a bit, you have a lot of deadspace in between your C and O. keep it up though
     
  15. CharmTwo

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    @ SKY_ONE: Cheers man. Really like the colour scheme and the way your letters flow is sweet. The R into the last O could use some work if you get me..
     
  16. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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    sky i think it would look better if it was even and with new R.....dope though

    crits on my throw pls
    ai25.photobucket.com_albums_c95_shdyfifty510_DSCF4642.jpg
     
  17. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    esco, ut lines are tooo thin, u have thick letters and thin blakc lines, that arent showing detail, make ur black outlines thicker, plus u need to kno your stucture of ur letters, where it bends and which bit curves where, that will come with experience, so now do another sketch!


    charm dont listen to people that are super toy, which is sky (sorri sky but we have to start somewhere)

    just stick to them simples.
     
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  18. CharmTwo

    CharmTwo Member

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    Hey thanks shamee :) I do a rake of those in the same modified simples but not alot of people like that style, i will stick with them though.

    Oh also, esco, decent throw up, look more at keeping your shadows in the right places and your "C" looks a bit off. Keep trying though.
     
  19. Crieg ya ya DIG

    Crieg ya ya DIG Member

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    damn esco u do have thin lines u shouldnt use them
     
  20. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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    i shouldnt use what?? if its the thin lines its cuz i only had a sharpie extra fine point...lol i wasnt gunna outline it wit a jumbo hard to buff or sumthin