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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
stop making one side of the v longer than the other
Yeah, thats what I'm talking about. Haha nice.
no can control- i cant even tell those are letters go back to simples, keyboard letters get those down before you start bending your letters, make your letters thicker.
taking over 603- chill out with the extensions, i can see your letters coming along but the extensions and arrows show degression rather than progression bust out some more simple people will tell you when it's time to add extensions.
atlok- love the colors but they make your piece and graffiti is not about colors its about the letters. think about it. your k is pretty simple and is coming correct work on the middle bar of the k a little more raise it. lose the long bar coming out of the e i would make your first e like your second e. stop tryin to make your a so rounded play around with that letter individually its tricky. your n i nice but hidden too much by the a. the last e is nice except for the random bar on top of it lose all those the make your pieces look cluttered the stars too. work on some of your letters individually and go a little simpler your coming along nicely.
vois- go simpler keyboard letters, use a pencil not markers.
chump- the throwie is pretty decent, lose the bump on top of the s and work on the top right of the k.
Amk- you have alot of good line work in your pieces and the colors are nice too, but work on that o and switch up the letters some. practice your handstyles homie. get a notebook and fill that up with handstyles than get another one and do the same thing.
Personally some of the best pieces i have seen are black and white and have no extensions at all they are well developed simples, extensions and colors dont make a piece, the letters do.
EXAMPLE OF SIMPLES.
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vois- dont overlap your letters and put them at angles, just straight across with simple letters
atlok- really feelin that keane exchange, dopeness
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rhode. 401 + REJ
vois, keep at it man, your simples are gettin pretty solid
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ive been disapointed in every sketch i do lately...
rasek thats looking pretty nice but i think the s is throwing it off
i would try making the s with straight bars instead of the curved ones, so more like a backwards Z instead of S, i think it would help the flow of it a lot
ok, next sketch.
can i have a tootsie pop?
Sketch from today.. can you even see it? Somebody send me some markers :'(
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fucked up on the 3d
Vios- That last one you did is lookin right, show alittle more of the I though.
Sezer- Bump for the crits bro, its good to have some I can use.
Rasek- I dont know what your talkin bout bro, that shit looks good but the K needs alittle help though.
I finished it anyway..... Only colors I had.......
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sins i like ur shit paintin from the area code baby! rep that 603! but rasek ur shit is dope dont kno whats off bout it
jet thats clean man. i like it.
sin- nice. just wouldve worked better with the matching colors.
wish I could go to a nice locale and try this out roller style
Jet- your shit has been nice lately the painted stuff is clean as hell, almost better than your drawings
it all sucks.
vandal the only reason you like sins shit is cause you suck too.
you are the reason why manchester is so wack.
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some older stuff cause i havnt posted here for a while, but i have no way to get new pics to my laptop at the time
exchange i did with someone on here
any crits welcome
i tried simpler using bars
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