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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
bump no crits last time
iyt been on the forums for a while never posted up shit so am gunna start... i write tank i know theres writer in the world somewhere that write tank buh i live in the uk nd there not a big writer named tankso here my stuff crits plz ??
keane-likin ur stuff maybe work on the n abit buh shits gd
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this peace was for a mate he writes akap
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your s and e are legit, k is goofy, drop the arrows for now... and..... work on your k for the most part.
tane, take away the tight fills for a secound and just concentrate on your letters, the colors, three d and other stuff is being too much of a destraction to you.
golden rule of graffiti...
letters cum first, then you can have your orgasim.
WHAT? I have never been human LOL
sub-human is where its at.
Maddox; Drop arrows. Do Simples.
Sek; we've already talked.
5 minute sketch with a colored pencil initial outline. i dont like it too much. says gore.
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what do they say????
Tank - im diggin thos first 2 pieces they got some good steez the others i aint feelin any tho i think theyre lacking flow but it looks like ur improving
ITY! - if u wanna put bends in em try makin em sharp or not there at all the slow curves aint workin for u
NoCanControl - ur sketch is pretty hot man
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pen sketch in class blazed, crits?
dont put your fuckin face in your pictures
dont know if i wanna even take the time for the fill in fucked up the outline with my marker
also taking ideas on fill color....
got no crits
ACNTtry and make your final outline less shaky, and your A messes with the simple letter flow. If your gonna do crooked letters do it with all of them not just one.
gore I like it just fix up the letters abit the G seems a lil odd, the top part to me and make the O somewhat bigger. ( i used to write gore also)
yeah man WEED
Havent posted in a while, heres a two pager. TASK SORT make it rain bitches
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everyone already knows what sex looks like so who gives a fuck.
and why bother posting shit if you don't take anybody's advice?
all of you toys who don't GO SIMPLE when people tell you to.
and then come back like CRITS?!?!? OMG!!!
take some fucking advice or don't ask for it.
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