i knew it

 

geez haha i was like thats a nice k... but then i thought thats not what he writes lol so its an N... i feel sloe =[

 

quick sketch


crits porfavor.

 

dew- i can't really see the lines that well (vision=not what it used to be) but from what i can see, i like it. hit that with a ballpoint or something and c'mon back

 

Irek that is nasty I love your style I used to always try nd do shit like that then it wasn't working to good but neways dope shit

 

thats what i was gonna do.. but just looking for somw crits before i clean and ink it up

 

I messed up the black outlines, really need a better pen, its too thick:

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Smez that aint bad jus the outline is really thick and the m is a lil fucked up you should more on the fill in add a second color

 

Thanks man, I definitely agree with everything you've said, cheers for the comment

 

smez new to graffiti thread please... im not trying to start shit but youll get better quicker if you use bars and do simples...

 

dew i agree with injury i cant really see it that well but what i do see looks good ink and then re post

 

I did start off with simples/bars and it grew into that piece, disheartening to say the least. Nevermind...

 

smez, hahahahah, thats a really ugly name. but anyways. new to graff thread.

irekn, i think your I should be the most dominate letter, more then the k and the e. hopefully you get what i mean.

sock, watch the parellel lines in your bars make sure they stay parellel.

jetpack, your getting good, you should fuck around with wildstyle, or bend the shit and add little extentions out of your letter.

dewster, make your bars skinnier, you don't leave any room to bend them. and you don't leave enough negitive space.

 

it doesnt look like your using bars

 

nahhh son, wildstyles are wack imo. i like havin my shit readable. im gonna start coming up with some crazy straight fills though. if the fills crazy, simple letters can be hard enough to read.

im talkin like, 10 color fills.

 

right on.

 

ya a crazy fill can give a simp a whole new feel imo, but its gotta be done right.

 

crazy - more nuts than a cashew
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irekkkknn.

 

Thats so tight dude.



Tried 3-d instead of a drop cause it looked too busy, and tried a different A on the second.