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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

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    Looks good task, do your thing. Honestly, I don't know what the fuck "MarOne" is talking about.
     
  2. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Haha MarOne, you tell me to post in the toy thread, then when I do, you hate on it. Thanks Oak I appreciate the positive feedback!
     
  3. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    you post in both threads. Keep it out of the BB thread. Stay here.

    Sounds like your ego is a little inflated too. Just calm it down a little.
     
  4. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    nocancontrol, that's dope.
    task, i like it except for the K is a little fucked up. do a drop shadow on the next one.
    shuk, your u looks kinda like an L.
     
  5. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    nocan- its nice but im not feelin that style
    oak- needs more flavor shake its pritty ddope i like it
    shook0 go a lil more simp
    ai259.photobucket.com_albums_hh311_frankeecin_095.jpg
    ai259.photobucket.com_albums_hh311_frankeecin_093.jpg
    the second one has better struccccter
     
  6. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Fuckin around with the same colour scheme haha. Crits? Ignore the throw.
    View attachment 378440

    Shuk- K and H aren't flowin. Make the letters the same size? And possibly change the U because it looks like an L. Decent S though!
     
  7. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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    the T and K in your throwie look weird to me
     
  8. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    T the vertical part is to much over to the left, and the k is fine, your one still looks like a L. and your bar doesn't match.
     
  9. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Thats why I said ignore the throwie:p
     
  10. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    dont i get any crits?
     
  11. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Cin, your second simp is showing progression, which is good, because honestly I havent seen much from you. But keep it up man, you're definately going in the right direction.
     
  12. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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    bring your N together more so there isnt so much dead space and maybe try a capital I
     
  13. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    TASK, i like the simple style a lot, good shit. the 1 could use some work, it looks a little awkward. the S could use some work too.
    good direction though, looks great.
     
  14. Shoook

    Shoook Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits guys but just one question i dont know how the u looks like a "L"
     
  15. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    oops, i thought he ment the piece sorry dooooooooooooooooooooooooid
     
  16. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    dude i love ur shit but really stop putting that 1 every where...or at least make it better...it dosent look so good -_-
     
  17. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    anyone down for an exchange, thats decent or better. bored as hell, and exchange is the only motovation.
     
  18. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    Haha will do jupstick.
     
  19. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    I actualy like the name Kobra.
    My olfd Name was Tekz, then Viruz, I didnt like either of them so i went to Kobra. Which to me is Orgianal beacuse when i get better It will look ill.

    Task- Likin it man. Nice Throwie
     
  20. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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