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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    nukes -your improving meng, keep it up. Just keep working on those blocks and keeping size uniform. + Remove arrow from tag?
    gupe - i dont like the tapered end of the G
    raze- meh bottom R looks like H, bars kinda uneven.
     
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  2. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    nukes-simples ar elooking descent but you hand style is fucking heariting man,kill the arrows and stop crunching everythign together just keep it simple man ;)
     
  3. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    work on your flow.. .if you don't know what that is... go to simps.
     
  4. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Mo152 - That G is mad hot but looks more evolved then the rest of ur letters try lettin the others keep up
    Raze - aint feelin the curls and is way to sloppy
    Nukes - try keepin em all the same height
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    the sinn piece i had originally done the fill a year ago and left it at a friends found it tonight so fixed it and made it the best i could with it
    crits?
     
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  5. "Louis XIV"

    "Louis XIV" Member

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  6. clockmodel

    clockmodel Senior Member

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    critiques are welcome:

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  7. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    heres a crit.

    GIVE EM TO GET EM BITCH!!
     
  8. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    fuck with the second one and holla back
     
  9. "Louis XIV"

    "Louis XIV" Member

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    diggin the style of the first one clock
     
  10. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    ill work on the flow and thanks for all the crits, first time i got more the 1 or 2.

    louie, dont be a bitter, your bottom two are better then your first for sure but thats not saying much, you def need to work on more simple shit with the curvs not like the bottom 2 simples.

    evasion it looks fresh i feel like its in space lol.

    squid more simple.
     
  11. clockmodel

    clockmodel Senior Member

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    your vermont "influence" is very clear.. you know what im talking about.
     
  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  13. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    clock-for the first one stop with all that random shit coming out of no where that makes me want some koolaid...i say keep doing what you did in the last one
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    blocks for the crew.....idk why my dum ass made the letter so damn close but what ever :(
     
  14. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    That R is hawt Jetty
     
  15. clockmodel

    clockmodel Senior Member

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    thanks to all who responded. that was fast!
    jetpack - very clean.. If i had to say anything it would be that the R and S vary in thickness more than the other letters. exchange?
    smoothnuts - haha kool-aid... Like your stuff. reminds me of my favorite.. Dondi. exchange?
     
  16. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    hmmmm i guess i be dow for an exchange....
    but i must ask hows that remind you of dond,unless your talking about some of my other shit from pages back then i guess i could see that haha
     
  17. JETPACK!!

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  18. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    yeah i dont like that shit much either ah well i was just dicking around any way....
    jetty,the a looks like it should be a bit taller,the extentions on the leg of the r and k ar wack you hsould just square off the end of the leg like you did with the left bar of the k...if that makes sence haha
     
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  19. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    to be honest, thats what i think looks better. but everyones sayin the leg shits look good.
     
  20. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    naaaah you should most deff just suare off the edges....