Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

    • Messages: 1,940
    • Likes Received: 1
    hey, that's not nearly as horrible as your other stuff is. good job. watch the bar widths, and curve the bar for your S rather than trying to add bars to each other. lose the drips and put a bar in the middle of your E rather than a circle. your 3D is off too, try doing a drop shadow for now.
     
  2. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

    • Messages: 726
    • Likes Received: 0
    yaa thanks i jus cant get a grip on my S and K i need some help on those but i understand how to draw out my E now
     
  3. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
  4. emel

    emel Senior Member

    • Messages: 408
    • Likes Received: 0
    you might wnat to try to keep the letters the same size... and define the O and E's

    or maybe you could put forth an ATTEMPT to do some nice simples



    btw......stock cappin bullshit and being on pandasex nuts steez is fucking ugly ............. take that into mind
     
  5. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
    Yeah dude I'm on pandasex nuts ok. I guess ORFN is on pandasex nuts too huh?
     
  6. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
    Looks good, I don't like your tags though. I think they should be simpler to accompany your simple style.
     
  7. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
  8. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

    • Messages: 1,940
    • Likes Received: 1
    very nice hint, some of the nicest simples ive seen in a while. really feelin the fills on the first and last couple. the only thing i noticed was that the topline of some of your sketches was inconsistant, like the first had a very slight slope downwards to the left and the "damn right" had a curve inwards. but the letters are ill.
     
  9. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

    • Messages: 2,458
    • Likes Received: 14
    Fucking solid Hint.
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2008
  10. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

    • Messages: 667
    • Likes Received: 0
    ah yea I always have trouble with that on straightletters
     
  11. euthanasia

    euthanasia Member

    • Messages: 6
    • Likes Received: 0
    I'm about to do a massive post. I'm pretty new to this whole thing, don't have any supplies for sketching other than pencils and stuff and i got a krink mop but im not bringing that out until i get my style down. For the most part I started sketching this year. Crits on these would be appreciated.

    ENCOR
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0569.jpg <BR>
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0568.jpg <BR>
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0567.jpg <BR>
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0566.jpg <BR>
    Kinda like that throwie "e"..not sure yet<BR>
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0565.jpg <BR>
    Afro pick in the top of the "e"<BR>
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0564.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0558.jpg
     
  12. euthanasia

    euthanasia Member

    • Messages: 6
    • Likes Received: 0
    two letter "er"
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0560.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0557.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0561.jpg
    first word...euth...deffinatley focus on shit other than the letters here


    and my newer stuff
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0563.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0556.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0554.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0552.jpg
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0553.jpg
    for my buddy eric
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0551.jpg
    for my buddy graham
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0562.jpg
    for mugs
    ai306.photobucket.com_albums_nn265_KatjaKrafft_IMG_0555.jpg
    no affiliation with hert nsf bf, just dig his style and flipped his word
     
  13. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

    • Messages: 2,223
    • Likes Received: 7
    just two pen freestyles with the newer style im fucking around with...
    ai208.photobucket.com_albums_bb207_doap1_Picture653.jpg
    ai208.photobucket.com_albums_bb207_doap1_Picture649.jpg
     
  14. white

    white Senior Member

    • Messages: 160
    • Likes Received: 0
    HINT - those fills are pretty good, good shadow and colors too
    smooth nuts, i like the second one more, the first one that has the break off, it throws it off kinda i think idk looks akward to me
     
  15. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
    euthanasia resize your pictures next time, because those pictures are really big

    and it's cool that you're doing simpleish stuff but I think you should go simpler

    and really master the simples before you start adding cool stuff
     
  16. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
  17. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

    • Messages: 753
    • Likes Received: 1
    Who wants to do some handstyle exchanges with me?
     
  18. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,689
    • Likes Received: 17
    Oak im glad to see you doing something different, or atleast semi different. Why dont you try gettin some bubble type a letters down now?
     
  19. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

    • Messages: 297
    • Likes Received: 0
    Yeah let's go, I'm hella bored.
     
  20. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

    • Messages: 2,223
    • Likes Received: 7
    bottom page bump..