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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    dude that tree is fresh. i have no idea what happened to your talent but the first one isnt working at all, is it supposed to be a way overcomplicated A? i would say strip it down to how you did the second sketch. second sketch works out alright good use of bars and cool background. the cut in of the top right bar of your k doesnt work for me and i dont like the wierd little squishy pointy things at the bottoms of all your letters.
    but damn that tree is tight
     
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  2. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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  3. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    yea lol the 3d is fucked but the letters are nice and clean

    can, that second ones background gets me all hot and bothered lol idk what it is but i think its super fresh, and the tree is badass.

    still workin bars more.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1243/img00146ge7.jpg
     
  4. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    dude im feeling tose G U and P but ur problem is the E aww that uper bar dosent flow with all the rest...
    maybe try making it more umm strait?
    btw that tree rocksss i love it XDD
    anyways heres my shit...
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    [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/981/1506081617rx9.jpg
    and heres one for a battle...
    [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/9663/1606081022zt5.jpg
    any crits ppl?
     
  5. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    i used bars you can see em haha

    scare-im in the love with the first one....haha
     
  6. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    ai183.photobucket.com_albums_x52_ChrisPhotos_02_369r001_2.jpg

    and some random B's

    ai183.photobucket.com_albums_x52_ChrisPhotos_02_369r002.jpg
     
  7. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    i like the middle B
    the sketch...umm not ur best...dosent really flow to me maybe cuz not my style...
     
  8. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    quick shit from this morning. gotta get my simples back on point.
    aimg6.uploadhouse.com_fileuploads_2057_2057136_holder_f5a53d7b7825a8f013b676dbe7f68d77.jpg
    and before a million ppl say it, i know the hand off the o is "cliche"
     
  9. NoCanControl

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    yea, i see what you mean, but you didn't follow threw, i see the bars on the outer side of the letters but on the inside, where the holes are, they ain't following the rules... do you get what i mean?
     
  10. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    ew at the extentions on the left side of the l and the long extentions coming out of the o's....haha
    edit*yeah i get ya man...i just like the rounded off rectangle haha ah well im done with that shit ima go back to what i was doing before
     
  11. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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  12. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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  14. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    dude your letterform is dope but i thinkit would be way sicker if you kept your bars equal width for the whole bar, i can see you were doin it on purpose but i think your letterform is so solid that for at least your main bars it would look better if the bars stayed simple.
    and i dont like the extension of the a that cuts down into the k, it looks forced as opposed to helping the letterform. way dope coloring though, especially on the 3D
     
  15. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    An SAS character i drew...im going to redraw the whole thing because the paper is fucking shit to render it...and also get a better scan..

    Im posting it here so i know if there are anythings up with it before i begin to redraw it..
    There is some missing down the middle so try to ignore that.

    Hes placing his supressor on his MP5 for anyone wondering what hes doing.

    Thanks.
     
  16. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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  17. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    mass-yeah he looks fat,but i'd say thats due that it was done on 2 seperate pages,(am i rite?)and those pages look a bit spaced,looks nicely made though

    emel-not feeling that much,the fill and back ground looks dope,the only letter im atleast feeling is the R,not realy liking the letter form,sorry,would look better if the bars had all the same width.

    nocancontrol-damn you,this tree is sick as fuck,not liking the first sketch,don't know what you tried to do(an A?),the second sketch looks decent

    scare-haha,i agree the 3 dee is fucked on the last ones,your lettering looks nice though

    revid-the hand is cliche :p,,j/k maybe try making it do something (eg: Pointing on the piece,or using a spray can,or w/e feels good to you)

    bet-niicee

    jupe-nice simps,nothing more to say
     
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  18. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    mass that char looks fat...and the weapon is like to small
     
  19. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Lol Call of Duty 4 Im a beast at that game...
    K/D 2.34!!!

    Mo Im like thoses bars they look nice.
     
  20. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

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