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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  2. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    crits.
     
  3. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    no can control i like the first one, man i keep having this feeling like ive met you somewhere before loooollll
     
  4. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  5. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I'm gonna have to try that style out later this week NoCanControl, just to let you know :)
     
  6. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    sorry i made him on ms paint... then filtered on photoshop to smooth out the edges... i really like childish simple characters, and otc's.

    and its GI by the way, just too lazy to come up with a decent z, so i just didnt.
     
  7. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    -osnap, on your pink and white roke: to me your e doesnt seem to flow enough with the rest of it, i feel the middle bar should be fatter and not a little circle. it just seems to end too open if you get what im saying. the sharp edges arent really working either.
    on the white and green one: your o's o should be more center and it looks like the long bar on your r is too fat. also, your vanishing point is off.

    -no can control, i see what youre getting at but it looks like it can be refined, maybe
    fix the part where the bottom of the k randomly comes in on the r with no cut in or anything. the r to k extension doesnt really flow to me either but man, that E is fucking ace.

    super unfinished first version thing for "jare":
    [Broken External Image]:http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9360/0622081209ho8.jpg

    boring:
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    [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/3299/0610081350ot3.jpg

    [Broken External Image]:http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/868/0622082112lh5.jpg
     
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  8. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    yeah the green one was a quickie, im calling it a night and trying again tomorrow when im not so freaking tiered
     
  9. esco93

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    ai25.photobucket.com_albums_c95_shdyfifty510_SKETCHIESKETCH_2.jpg

    didnt get any crits sum1 jus told me i suck

    calculating infamy: not felin the throw u should add a lil more detail
     
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  10. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    youre trying too hard to make your letters complicated. go simpler and work on your 3d. the new to graffiti thread is really helpful when you find yourself making mistakes like that.
     
  11. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    yo calc that first piece is mad creative, i love the fingers
     
  12. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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    yeah calc the piece is pretty dope i wana see it colord..
    aite check this out ai25.photobucket.com_albums_c95_shdyfifty510_l_fa8d9490e17192fe4850ba79ee1c707c.jpg
     
  13. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    thanks, i have to go racking before i can redo it to fix the flaws and color it.

    that one is more simple but its still too complicated. make your "o" more O shaped and toss the whole "S". the bottom half of your 'E' doesnt need to be brought back up or have that mini extension on the bottom either. when doing 3d or drop shadows just try doing it as a solid fill because your lines inside dont point in the right direction. they should be more or less going the same way. try using a drop shadow and imagining theres a light bulb casting a shadow at one point in the page and draw in where it would actually be hitting if that makes sense. try drawing simple letters like veranda font because even though its boring it really helps a lot. do the same for your handstyles though i think i do see that enem influence in them.
     
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  14. esco93

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    aite thanks alot
     
  15. hal.cyon

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    some doodles of late. i inked a few, doubt i'll color any. haven't had much time for drawing lately and its showing. i hate all my t's.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/9030/002rh2.jpg

    pen freestyle

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    some weak throw-ups.

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    for the hense battle, again pretty weaksauce.

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    for some reason the s was an afterthought. not really all there when i drew it.

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    for the shake battle, don't really remember drawing this much.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7360/009wt0.jpg

    had fun inking this one. i kinda like it outside the t.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6470/014xa7.jpg



    esco - start with simples, that is really bad. new to graff thread will prolly help.

    jares - like the top one, and you beat me at throw ups.

    oh snap - thats pretty hot. i like it a lot man.

    nocancontrol - i like the first, the second just seems too flat or something.
     
  16. calculating infinity

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    i like the first and last ones the most. your throws and handies (going from the one in the bottom of the second flick) could use a little work though. maybe if you made your throws more round on the bottom itd be easier to work with.
     
  17. beyondyereyes

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  18. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    this shit reminds me of the FireFox logo lol

    Hal. all thoes are so fresh.. i mean damn. i like the hense one the best.
     
  19. rsakens

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  20. drop one.

    drop one. Senior Member

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    like McDonalds
    Bara Ba Ba Ba im lovin it lol