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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Ha yeah..i was wondering forever where to place it..i had one placement coming from the back of his body..and another up high...but i decided to just place it where it isnt viewable...if someone could draw where itd look good i can edit it in..as for the stub..i kind did one at the top of the RPG if you can just see..

    As for the flying part...wouldnt you if youv just been hit by a Barrett 50.Cal'ler ? hahahaha
     
  2. JETPACK!!

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    yeah, you'd fly backwards. he looks like he's verticly flying

    P.S. the positioning of his elbow kinna makes his bicep appear backwards. and the lines seperating the fingers are brought down a little too much imo. the palm of your hand should be roughly the length of your fingers
     
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  3. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Ugh...My bad then i guess !

    50 posts away from 1,000
    Im gonna post whore.
     
  4. JETPACK!!

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    its a good sketch. im just pickin out the shit that kinna makes you go "there's something wrong, but i cant quite put my finger on it"

    i edited it late too
     
  5. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Yeah i see what you mean now thanks mate.
    Next will be a USMC with a Deagle..
     
  6. Hater-AiD~>

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    ai300.photobucket.com_albums_nn30_AiC_TN_piecin_2a4d1bcb.jpg

    I think it has potential..just started messing around with it today. What do you guys think? Maybe once I get all the proportions right and find something to do with the A itll be pretty decent
     
  7. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    ^simples Simples Simples!
     
  8. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    ive been doin simples for god damnin almost 4 years..it doesnt make sense..i dont know where else to go
     
  9. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    MASS - That looks tons better, and Jet all ready said everything that could be. Although, when I first looked at it I thought it was an underwater scene for some reason. I mean, I can obviously tell its not just because of whats goin down in the pic, but yeah. Just putting it out there.
     
  10. JETPACK!!

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  11. sketch3

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    is it just me or dose the blood look like it should be spurting ouut the other side,
    cuss his position looks like he got sniped from behind
     
  12. JETPACK!!

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    i was gonna say that too. but i didn't wanna get too nitpicky
     
  13. Mass Appeal

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    Haha yeah...iv not learnt much as to cloth movements...im taking all this on board folks..thanks Jet Pack...but can i say..that " pregnant bludge " is soooo nitpicky ! Jajajajajajajajajaja
     
  14. sketch3

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    but still huge improvement
     
  15. white

    white Senior Member

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    hater aide - the g and the a connect kinda wierd
    as for the cartoon .... i thought this was a black book thread, not character but anyway ya i think his head should go the other way otherwise it looks really good
    jetpack - everytime you post i think u get better keep it up man ur shit is fly as hell
    atlok - sick shit keep it up man like the xchange wit satire
    sketch 3 - your sig is bothering the hell out of me lol

    CRITS??? POR FAVOR Superman Style inspired piece
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  16. Thrice

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    Let me guess you're pushing the marker? Pull it, makes the lines alot cleaner.
     
  17. white

    white Senior Member

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    ya i was laying on the floor i know i know i know
     
  18. Thrice

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  19. NoCanControl

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    when you stop seeing them as simples, and into bars that flow together that make a letter then.. you'll poop.
     
  20. white

    white Senior Member

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    thrice - squeeze ur letters together a little more and make the first hump on the m the same height as the second

    crits? same as earlier, second attempt at 3D and believe me when i say this, my blend of red and with looks 10x better in person

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