Jetpack you're a fucking poser. All pieces, no tags, no throwies. Just a little bitch, no illegals, just nothing. Using your daddy's billboard don't mean shit, get some real heavens bitch. I tear shit up where Im at, in a cop infested place where Im the only writer in 10miles, fucking already made the paper.

 

Why do i doubt that?

 

If you lived where I am you'd understand, not going to say too much since cops are on here tho.

 

mass, good job fuck. thats a lot better than the last one, with the clothes an whatnot. i was waitin for you to post it. the angle of his hips is a bit off, and work on his hands. but other than that. its good

starting to run outta paper.

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You have that many skills and you go around and talk about shit about other peoples stuff. Give some crits that will help, there isn't absolutely no point on insulting someone. This is a goddamn toy forum, everybody who post here are toys so they don't have to have super skills. They come to here to get crits not beeing insulted. And if people are toy then there is no reason to do illegal shit, would you like to see some random toyshit on every corner? I don't think so. Choose another place to give your instructions how do be real hardcore g and how to keep it real. It seems like lot of people in here have got some big ego problems in here.

Moderators, please delete that shit in here.

Rasek - like the top on the best, I would make the A and E as big as other letters though.
HohEnvy - dope character, but your letters need lot of work. do some simple block letters.
osnapizzel - there is no point of buming a piece it is on the same page.

 

thrice shut the hell up your a fucking retard jetpack gets billboards and tunnles with his fresh little simples and that makes him a poser?
some one seems butthurt to me...
and everyone else ragging etpack log off and sketch.
jetpack-use the e and s from the top sketch with some 3d and the smaller a
envy-stop what your doing,rock some simples,use bars and read the new to graffiti thread
just some repost so im not flickless

 

A throwup attempt...note the word attempt .

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ok thank you spark for the critiques il start practicing those blocks

 

fize-make the f lowercase,add a drop shadow and try over lapping your letters

 

Also try making your letters all the same size.

And Doap that second one is one of the freshest things I've seen from you.

 

thanks roguebert
you should post up homie i wanna see some new rogue sketches
NOW!

 

i forgot to thank you to smooth_nuts

 

Here is another attempt. I can't seem to get a normal looking lowercase f without it looking semi-retarded =/. I realized the e was smaller then the z a little.

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New sketch in progress. Thinking about fattening up all letters.

 

im bumping this over the utter complete fuckign bullshit that took up all the last page..if i was a mod id ban you all...exept Hoes (L) (L) (L)

 

Ahem- your getting there. you have the right idea

 

This is my first post on this forum and im going to say that i just started to sketch today so this is my one of my 2 sketches.

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its sloply filled because i had to use sharpie fine points for it all

 

Should I fatten up my letters? I feel like they're too thin.

 

mass it looks good just the hed look like a conehed