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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
did some body say my name?
bump, nuts, the bars on your E seem to thin. not feelin the diagonal middle bar either.
the purple was supposed to be part of the fill but it just ended up looking like highlights, i'm not that good at filling anyway so i thought i would get some practice. ill try it again without the extensions and a thinner purple, ill try one directional 3d as well
inspired by something i saw in the paint thread
i realised that i love y's
smooth- the o and e seem thin compared to the rest, the exclamation mark is to small a hole at the bottom and it tapers down too thin and the middle bar of the e should be horizontal i think
cancontrol- the bottom half of the skull seems weird what is that supposed to be? i think you should continue developing with that style, the horizontal bar of the l should be thin and the bottom one is nice
beger- round the bottom of the g and the inside bit of the g
smooth- nice, the a does look a bit like a r but i thought it was an a and i think i lower case a would not look as good
bigel- you were one of the first people i saw with dope pieces when i was creeping through bs
deco- just keep the basics of those letters and work with them instead
rasek- i cant see yours
letsgobombin: yo, you better paint that fucken last one homie.
thatd be fucken ill to see.
one of the best simples ive seen in a while.
just make the c abit thicker and bring the s a slight closer to it.
seriously, go paint that shit man.
Rasek: shits flowing nicely. the cracks are pretty ill too, i just don't see them fitting with the type of letters your trying to connect em with. know what i mean? other than that, just the extension comming out of the end of the R is kinda outta place imo. Maybe bring the letters abit closer together, real sick though homie.
new letters that i am working on, i am aware they are not clean nor perfect. this is the first attempt at them, so. some feedback would be nice
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give em to get em.
if that last letter is an E than it looks sick man
i do all the time, i post like 5 or 6 crtits a post, about 2 or 3 at a time before asking for any. smart ass.
ye but you've got to crit on every post you cant just crit when you feel like it and then expect people to crit you
i bet your a spoiled kid huh?
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trying some new york ish.
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freestyle once again.
anyways, i cant really read what it says,
i see gupe.
try and add some 3D and some colors, should be sick.
try to also add some flow, some of it looks stiff at some spots.
i like that main blue one, just make the second e the same as the first one and dont point the g, try it like the one in the first page but without the line going down and with the big square head, obviously
why cant i crit whenever i feel like it?
why do i have to crit of every post?
it dose say gupe.
the second pic, blue throw is fuckin dope man
already critted everyone on this page
through some 3d on that last one and it'd be fresh man...
rasek - lookn ill dude, only thing i would change is where those extensions are coming from on the R and K, or even just have them not attached at all
smooth_nuts - im not feeling that at much at all (though i kinda like the H), no flow and the proportions seem off, just work on same width bars for now before you start bending them too much
pocs - the rollerish one would look ill with some 3d coming off it, and that second one looks highly Raby inspired if you catch my drift. regardless your progressing nicely keep at it
said - fuckn dope man, im really feeling all of those throws
heres a sketch from today, a bit fucked and a bad pic but oh well, styles slowly coming along
oaklander the swastikas are backwards
pocs- add some colour to the last one
scream- not sure what it says
M freestyle, ignore the highlights.
pen simple from the last day of school
What are bars?
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