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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    swolen- im diggin that alot man, just not the l maybe open it up if u know what im sayin
    bombin- i think it would look better if the letters were straight
    aima- letters are pretty decent, maybe draw that m and it would look better
    abek- i dont like the little bars going through the letters, but its hot man
    mass- id like to see that handy painted with some flares on the a and r, and you def get a break from the critting. i just see alot of newer cats on here that dont
    i aint sketched nothing new today so just crittin, anyone down to exchange peices?
     
  2. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    haha i like my L, i dont think ill be changing it up too much any time soon but thanks for the crit
     
  3. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Itd look decent on a freight Scream
    Seyar..ill do it with flare ill get a flick too

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    For my ***** Note
     
  4. antere07

    antere07 Member

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    scream- looks sick man
    letsgobombin- dats nice still simple
    00-made-00- i aint 2 keen on it but still lol

    inked that sketch
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  5. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    damn dude...that looks sharp..
    really feelin it.
    good color choice..
    ahh just maybe add more breakoffs and bars to the orange in the K?
     
  6. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    abek- freshh man, i think work on your K more
    aher- i like it man
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    i think i might stick with ths style
     
  7. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    screamout- id definately like to see that on a frieght, diggin;)
     
  8. antere07

    antere07 Member

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    cheers and yeah i 4got about em on that lol
     
  9. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    abek- good letters, really feelin the fill. do you paint?
     
  10. antere07

    antere07 Member

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    yeah but ive only painted like 3 times man
    1 i didnt think i was good enuff before
    and
    2 i didnt have the money
     
  11. Mass Appeal

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  12. Dewster_OnE

    Dewster_OnE Senior Member

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  13. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    mass im really feeling that, i just wish i could see it better haha
     
  14. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    Give 'em to get 'em.
     
  15. Dewster_OnE

    Dewster_OnE Senior Member

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    i give crits barely getm back so i dont bother but i been these last couple days
     
  16. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    Alright, lol.

    Finish the 3d on the c.
    Erase the extra lines that arent a part of the sketch.
    Ink it.

    It looks pretty good man, stick with it.
     
  17. Dewster_OnE

    Dewster_OnE Senior Member

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    haha i inked it neway cuz i thought no1 was gonna crit
    -thinking bout adding yellow clouds or drips or suttin behind the green but not to sure how to go bout it.. suggestions/crits?

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  18. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    your 3d is way off dude, its going in different directions and its all different sizes.
    your letters arent completely horrble but they arent good either
    stick to simpler styles for now
     
  19. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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  20. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Blue- Clean it up a bit, and Try to keep you bars the Same, keep workin on it. =D