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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    ^ thats sick you got a girl that writes and shes not horrible too haha
    skus your fillin up some pages huh haha good work man i like the blue and silver one the best but theres a lot of other clean fills and i like the thgrowie you did for seedz
    zof i like your style its different than all the steroetyplical bullshit haha
    you too aher haha i like yours too and although the note looks like you did it in two seconds its still nice
    mar nice simp i like the middle of the a a lot and i think i missed something what happened to cais?

    amd my toy entry for the new battle haha...theres no way id come close to winning but more people will see it and i like it:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3115/masteup3.jpg
     
  2. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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  3. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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  4. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    ii'm talkin about the letter style kinda. i know its rough, but i know that there's a lot that you could do with it is what i'm saying.
     
  5. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    I like it tunka, maybe clean up your lines, and try to make the flow make more sense, right now its kind of everywhere.

    Exchange with proper (helm)-

    ai274.photobucket.com_albums_jj241_mazeonerr_helmxchange.jpg
     
  6. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    thats lookin nice cabre, you down to exchange sometime?
    tunka- try to keep everything basically on the same level, i usually draw a line where i want the tops and bottoms of my letters
    scab- the first one seems too busy, chill it out some. on the second, bring the c out and fix the middle bar on the a
    ranks- basically just do what scab said
    tester- hot, ive always felt your style. on ur girls, letters arent bad but 3ds off in a few places
     
  7. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    Cabre, i woulda maybe put the M abit wider like more stretched out cause it looks kinda crunched up with your L. I dont like the mini extension in your e a simple woulda looked hot there. Looks good man.
     
  8. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    yeah the reason it is crunched is because I ran out of room, if you look closely the forcefield is cut off by the end of the M.
     
  9. Oaklander

    Oaklander Senior Member

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  10. antere07

    antere07 Member

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  11. Shiva.

    Shiva. Senior Member

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    i think the extensions on the right of the K look a little wierd, maybe make the 'bend' a little less pointy, so it's just as wide as the extension-bars. the ones on the E look nice.
    but that's only detail, the rest looks nice.
     
  12. SkuzSCT

    SkuzSCT Senior Member

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    Yo Mar, It looks sick and all but that big extension coming off the top of the M throws of the balance.

    Oaklander, you rock the most random shit ever, keep doin your thing.

    Abek, that E is ill. Some of the add ons aren't quite working.
     
  13. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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  14. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    oaklander-very weird,dunno what to say

    abek-gorgeous,,but i find the add-ons on the e and on the k a bit useless,not feeling the arrow on the k,but im liking the ones on the E and the A(even if i have the same ones my a's)
     
  15. antere07

    antere07 Member

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    cheers and i duno neva seen ur shit lol
     
  16. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    lol i said that,cause im doing an alphabet and i had the same idea on the A,
     
  17. antere07

    antere07 Member

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    lol fair enuff lol
     
  18. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Ode to RASEKs "R" Just lookin for crits on the cracks and all that good stuff.

    ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a103_DeciMatioN_5_16151.jpg

    This needs a lot of work...just posting it so it doesnt seem like im just biting. Although I wish I could cause my R is faggish.

    ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a103_DeciMatioN_5_16152.jpg

    MAR - Diggin the purppp one. Nice and cleannn.
    ABEK - <3 I just think the K kinda throws the flow off. Maybe make the Bottom right bar kick in like the left bar of the A. Nah mean?
     
  19. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    It is rasek ish but so are alot of R's anywho the overall sketch is good though, i like the cuts in the 3D looks good!
     
  20. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Clout- Its Fresh with the cracks just make them stad out a little bit more and clean it up and it look Doppy Fresh :p Nice tho.