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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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  2. P-love

    P-love Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://media.newschoolers.com/uploads/cache/images/1215047038-607865-600x450-1215046941P1010025.JPG

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    excuse the shitty tags around it. i fucked up and its for a battle on this other website. just dont pay attention to those. and i fucked up the 3d but whatever.

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    this is an attempt at somewhat of a wildstyle. or at least a more complicated piece. any advice would be greatly appreciated. its not the name i usually write because it was for this girl. but crits are greatly appreciated.

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  3. P-love

    P-love Senior Member

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  4. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    please pm me with flix of these other writers with my style...i havnt seen too many people who's work goes across the bottom like that, let alone same letter structure flow.
    thnx for the crits though, much appriciated:D

    your style is pretty unique though, props on that
    i think brighter colors would bring it out a lil more though
     
  5. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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    Rab is on that Christmas time shizz.
    Good work on that capital B man.
     
  6. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I don't have any pictures of it, just seems kind of like a played out style. Sorry if there was any offense taken. ANd thanks man, it's just a dark picture, I have a brighter one, but it looks shitty.
     
  7. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    yo pie got some tight ass gangster writing...



    :)
     
  8. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    lots of good shit in here lately

    tunka - im defanitly feeling your simps way more than your other style, mad fills btw

    gizurd - im a fan of your style i thoink you should keep working with your old Z like on that green and yellow piece thats upside down

    saek - stick to simples, use bars, if this makes no sence to you than read the new to graff thread

    heres a new sketch of mine, i definitely should stick to the lower case e lol
    and i fucked up the 3d a little, nothing too noticeable but its bothering me

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  9. P-love

    P-love Senior Member

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    im really that toy? ive been doing simples forever now, and i wanted to try something more complicated. and of course i know what bars are, but aight whatever, i'll try to stick to those more i guess... is there anything i did well in any of the pieces i posted?
     
  10. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    p-love- out of all of em i guess the bottom one is the strongest, but like swole said just stick to simps, if youve been doin em post them up so we can see if you have them down
    swolen- lookin dope, feelin that l alot more.
    rab- ill. im likin the faces in all the letters, especially the b. the letters are solid too
    tunka- fill is dope, idk im just not feelin it though/ im not sayin it aint good just not my cup o tea lol
    imma post some new sketches up soon
     
  11. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  12. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    your pretty great SWOLEN, the colors are magical... damn, if you could find a way to make your letters taller it would look more... complete?
     
  13. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    haha thanks, maybe ill try some taller letters next time.
    and the colours are really only like that because all my markers are dead so i need to layer them to fill the entire letter lol
     
  14. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Snapizzle- Nice Fills.
     
  15. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    please get into tattooinnnnnnn.
     
  16. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    woah teze, you gave up modship? when'd that happen?

    an yeah, bigel, you should get into tattooing, your sketches look enough like em
     
  17. IlikePie

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  18. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    pie, quickly! exchange!

    ill have yours up in 15 minutes!
     
  19. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    the only thing u need to learn no one can teach u. its something that u just know when u get there. stop putting a time line to graffiti. or u will never get there.

    pie- dont take this the wrong way but i hate what u just posted. seems like your trying to force a style thats not workin. but if u keep at it maybe it will come together. id try to come up with your own style.

    biggie elerOner- always feel your stuff, imma fan. :D

    mr smapizzle - simples are my fav. shit to see. love it, i might make my 3d solid, to me it distracts from the letters. nun the less i like the direction your movin in. keep up.

    scream - dont got much for ya, looks like u know what u like and your trying it. cant give much crit.

    i know this aint black book shit but its my first painted vinyl and i wanted some feed back. is it too busy?

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  20. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Gimme a day, I have another exchange to do now. But your name should be a bit easier I think :)