i does look like you forced it but i still like the style keep working at it

 

dont be sad nukka! thats just one mans opnion. u just need more development eh? prove me wrong.

 

That last one was pretty forced. Honestly, I prefer people giving telling me what I'm doing wrong than just straight up jock riding. But yeah, I'm feelin' that Piece you did Fube, I'd just like to see like one of those simple letters in each of the words.

 

the B's fugly

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i laughed out loud at your sig jetpack
and i dont mind the b

 

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quick straight bar joint.

yeah remos, i was high an thought it would be funny to put that in there

 

^feelin it.
and that B, i think just completely round the bottom right?
maybe?
...i dunno.

 

rasek- i aint callin a bite but i think ive seen doap (smoothnuts) do that exact same E, maybe its a coincidence or im mistaken but im sure i seen it.

edit: woe wanna get in on a battle? me and another user are havin one and need another person
pm me

 

Quick pieces for a mate I just did. Yes they actually were rushed cause he had to leave and wanted the sketches. Don't worry, I'll scan the good shit in laterrrrrr..
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med why the arrows? they dont need to be there, itd be fine without em, you dont need arrows on everything, they're played.

 

yeh its all good, no offense man. i was just wondering because i dont see shit like that much, and to hear that i was like "damn where are you looking?"
i try to stray outside a little, keep stuff flowing and smooth..and across the bottom, but thats just because i live in the midwest and frieghts is whats up here.
ima post some sticker flix tomorrow, throws are on them though.
so watch out!
fube-you use a lot of nice greens
lol
think ima do a sticker dedicated to those colors tomorrow
bigel-your fish is totally tattoo worthy...way sweet

 

He wanted them.
I like that piece better without them, I'll do a better one tonight aye.
Good sketch bro, tail looks a bit funky though, not sure. Got any coloured ones?

 

BIGel, that shit's straight up raw,flawless
and med i think you should lose those arrows, they're pretty random but other than
that im feelin the "g"

 

Redid it but I don't like the G so much now, haha.
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emm im pretty new

and cud sum1 say how to put pictures straight into posts thanks

old stuff btw, pretty toy but meh, ill take newer pics

 

do simples stop with bublles unless your planning on just doin throwies even then go back to simples... loose the whole thing you got n use bars striaght letters whatever also go to the 'new to graffiti thread'

 

^ and it may seem harsh that he's tell you to forget what your doin but really man it helps a shit ton if you go to the new to graff thread and work out your letter structure...its really the only way to get better and thats really the only crit youll get until you start doin the simps with bars... also go to imageshack.us or another imagehosting site to post pics

 

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