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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_c9f4bb0d.jpg
    i think the y looks out of place because of the curves
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    can everyone see this? because last time i just got skipped over

    gasm- i agree with garbage, thats a nice g. the one on the bottom doesn't really look like a g, i think its because of that thin extension. you could try the top of the s with just like a straight horizontal line and see how that works.
    peer- go simpler for now, i can see you're using bars but your letters are in consistent, keep all the bars the same width. the e's are ok just keep them consistent and round the other letters a bit more because they are the only rounded letters
     
  2. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    quickie in a friends book
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    crits?
    Letsgobombin - your R is a little awkward. fix the bottom bar to curve out maybe instead of in.
     
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  3. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    exchange anyone?!

    bored ass hell here. and bought a new black book.
     
  4. TaskOne

    TaskOne Senior Member

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    im down, what u write? throwys?
     
  5. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    kans, And throws are good. will have yours done in five or something.
     
  6. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    bump for crits...i never get crits any more :(
     
  7. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    doap- the T is good but the heart thing on the bottom of the K doesnt look right, neither does the A
     
  8. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    smoothz
    glad to see your using the bar method! if there is one thing that can help any "new to graff" advance, its the bar method:D
    the R is my favorite of yours because its the simplest.(if thats a word)
    and the O
    as for the k and the t, the heart things arent quite working, and i htink thats because they are a little random and disporportionate...but idk
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    i know this is the bbook thread, but i hope this helps...just some simples that i did, thats where the bar method got me so far anyways...
    sorry, some of the letters kinda got a throwie look to some of them, but its what i got for now. ignore the GCSK throw in the backround, CLOSER is the main word of the flick
     
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  9. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    ummm i've used bars since i started writing fool,i've only not used it a couple times out of bordem....and pratice what you preach man,and yeah i think the SPADE on the k doesnt work cause i made it to fat but ya know im just dicking with different letters

    i'll bust out some more tonight since im not going any thanks to this fucking sun burn!
    haha
     
  10. hammer_time

    hammer_time Banned

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    the spade/heart is the new played out arrow
     
  11. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    I thought it was played a while ago.
     
  12. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    pfft the spade is the shit....and so are arrows if theyre used right =/
     
  13. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    that is true. I personally don't use either. because i don't know how to use them correctly. lol
     
  14. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    haha word...i cant use arrows worth a shit and i can barely use the spade...just trying something new ya know cant get any better if dont try somethign different every so often
     
  15. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    smooth- lookin good for sure, throw a peice together usin those. down to exchange peices sometime?
    syerf- im just not feelin it, use some bars or make it a throw lol
    task- letters are lookin good, im not feelin the teo big extensions comin off of the t, but i see why you did them
    letsgobombing- try to make the letters look different from the handy, i cant really think of anything else to say
    gasm- feelin your style alot, the g and s you put in your last post are dope. i like the top of the g how it is and try what letsgobombing said for the s
     
  16. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    yeah man im down,sey right?
     
  17. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    seyar, doap?
    imma end up puttin on here either tonight or tomorrow for sure, prolly just gonna be a pen freezy so no worries on colors or anything
     
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  18. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    thats what they call me
    edit*
    same thing i was gonna do man,i almot never use colors haha...
    bump for a new page
     
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  19. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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  20. Gager2.9

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    ai345.photobucket.com_albums_p400_Gageman_2008_DSCF1593.jpg

    Hey, I tried making my stuff simple
    any help is greatly appreciated!
    Ima toy :p