im feelin this alot man, just not the bottom right of the a. maybe make it more like the r and k without the part comin out of the bottom, but keep this shit up for sure skewer- jetpack hit the nail on the head keane- dope as always, i really dont know what to say that hasnt already been said tare- keep workin with the top one, make the hole of the r round and have the leg comin out of it, no indent drip- keep goin with that shit, experiment with taller and wider letters, basically just do what you feel and keep sketchin
skewer- bars aren't just simple letters, go to the new to graff thread and have a look at drips newest stuff. that is bars saek- nice simp, but dont have that bit coming out of the side of the a. work on your handy as well
Ok so crits if want to its not much i am bumping it to show that other guy my bar letters AND if i do bend the bars how do i do it?
Get your bars down drip, there are not bad just a lil sketchy and the lines are a lil shakey, (but your on the right track dont turn back now lol). LOOk at someone like jetback(rasek) dude rocked the same simple probelly 100 times before he worried about bending letters and look where hes at now. (This goes for skewer,also check out the new to graff thread too man your not quite grasping the concept of bars.) Saek looking good man keep at it. but on the cross bar on the A loose the part that goes into the S looks way outta place. Sick M keane. Looking good rasek. meh havn't done anything I like in awhile, I'll space it out better and fix the O and 3d when I paint it. [Broken External Image]:http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/2008082-1.jpg
ok, yes. those weren't bar letters at all. So here's another try after looking at the other stuff. I know the four letters don't really go together; i was just sketching them individually.
nice but try to work on your W on the solid one i have the smae problem with mine when i do them otehr than that its cool and work on getting some of your lines not as shaky
DOBES- real sick man, cool style. what marker are you using for the highlights? looks great. fix up the 3d on the O and maybe throw in a different color forcefield like orange or something to make it POP a little. other than that, tight. SKEW- your first two steps were good, but when you got to the bending you messed up. keep all the bars the same width when bending, and overlap everything while you bend to get a better sense of where the bars line up. screw extensions for now, like on the K and W. just looks crappy, no offense, but try to take another look into the how to start or whatever thread.
your S and C look bad i cant tell that your c is a c looks like a backwards b or its not even legible and your s you cant read it eitehr work on those two and it should look great
Esco, i don't like the faces or the drawings, if that c was an e it would be okay. Make simple. Work off of a simple wire skeleton, if you know what I mean. kinda confusing? of well its soup crits thanks.
hey Ive been doing simple stuff as stated in the comments Ive got about 4 pages of rana written over and over again haha I tried some new stuff with this :\ not the best but here it is