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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    im feelin this alot man, just not the bottom right of the a. maybe make it more like the r and k without the part comin out of the bottom, but keep this shit up for sure

    skewer- jetpack hit the nail on the head
    keane- dope as always, i really dont know what to say that hasnt already been said
    tare- keep workin with the top one, make the hole of the r round and have the leg comin out of it, no indent
    drip- keep goin with that shit, experiment with taller and wider letters, basically just do what you feel and keep sketchin
     
  2. Skewir

    Skewir Member

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    Here are some efforts at bar letters.

    ai349.photobucket.com_albums_q370_SkewerVeed_IMG_0002.jpg



    sorry they're still kinda big.
     
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  3. P-love

    P-love Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  4. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    skewer- bars aren't just simple letters, go to the new to graff thread and have a look at drips newest stuff. that is bars
    saek- nice simp, but dont have that bit coming out of the side of the a. work on your handy as well
     
  5. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    Ok so crits if want to its not much i am bumping it to show that other guy my bar letters AND if i do bend the bars how do i do it?
     
  6. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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    Get your bars down drip, there are not bad just a lil sketchy and the lines are a lil shakey, (but your on the right track dont turn back now lol). LOOk at someone like jetback(rasek) dude rocked the same simple probelly 100 times before he worried about bending letters and look where hes at now. (This goes for skewer,also check out the new to graff thread too man your not quite grasping the concept of bars.) Saek looking good man keep at it. but on the cross bar on the A loose the part that goes into the S looks way outta place. Sick M keane. Looking good rasek.

    meh havn't done anything I like in awhile, I'll space it out better and fix the O and 3d when I paint it.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q158/toker_014/2008082-1.jpg
     
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  7. Skewir

    Skewir Member

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    ok, yes. those weren't bar letters at all. So here's another try after looking at the other stuff.

    ai349.photobucket.com_albums_q370_SkewerVeed_IMG_0001_2_1.jpg

    I know the four letters don't really go together; i was just sketching them individually.
     
  8. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    nice but try to work on your W on the solid one i have the smae problem with mine when i do them otehr than that its cool
    and work on getting some of your lines not as shaky
     
  9. P-love

    P-love Senior Member

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    DOBES- real sick man, cool style. what marker are you using for the highlights? looks great. fix up the 3d on the O and maybe throw in a different color forcefield like orange or something to make it POP a little. other than that, tight.

    SKEW- your first two steps were good, but when you got to the bending you messed up. keep all the bars the same width when bending, and overlap everything while you bend to get a better sense of where the bars line up. screw extensions for now, like on the K and W. just looks crappy, no offense, but try to take another look into the how to start or whatever thread.
     
  10. Skewir

    Skewir Member

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    allright thanks both of you.
     
  11. hammer_time

    hammer_time Banned

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    im not one to point this out alot, but there is a skew in sf who is pretty fuckin up
     
  12. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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  13. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    can some one post a pick of how to do a Q in bars i cant get it...
     
  14. esco93

    esco93 Senior Member

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  15. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    your S and C look bad i cant tell that your c is a c looks like a backwards b or its not even legible and your s you cant read it eitehr work on those two and it should look great
     
  16. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    RASEK - the one Cab just bumped...ill. Run with that shit homie.
     
  17. crevette

    crevette Member

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    Esco, i don't like the faces or the drawings, if that c was an e it would be okay.
    Make simple. Work off of a simple wire skeleton, if you know what I mean. kinda confusing? of well
    ai318.photobucket.com_albums_mm413_kurumaebi_scan0001.jpg
    its soup
    crits thanks.
     
  18. Skewir

    Skewir Member

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    Soup-make the letters have more even widths.
     
  19. Gager2.9

    Gager2.9 Member

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    hey Ive been doing simple stuff as stated in the comments
    Ive got about 4 pages of rana written over and over again haha
    I tried some new stuff with this :\ not the best but here it is
    ai345.photobucket.com_albums_p400_Gageman_2008_DSCF1624.jpg
     
  20. Rozwell

    Rozwell Member

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    these are from my first bbook, id consider them pretty toy,

    what do you guys think?

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