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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
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likin the 3d fade thing. make the fill smoother instead of outlining the shapes. nice tho.
what the hell are you doing in the toy forum? Your style is hella fresh, your no toy.
Lose the played out crosses for now and those curly things in the fill.
Thicken up the outlines too.
it could be a pretty sick style soon, with a bit of work.
hahaha well i've been slacking the past 3 or so months...so now imma get back on top of it
Piece im still working on.
Old Piece for ma old name.
408, you need to work on using bars and making sure your letters are the same thickness and that the lines match up
Alright, im new here
Messed up the face on that one^^Was meant to look like an e lol
your charact have real good potential and your second throw also. from my opinion.
ase- sikk stuff , first throwie is my fav, and those characters are dope
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numberonestunna- The last one's got some serious depth, the extension off the top of the P looks a little out of place to me when you go to read it, but it looks ill in a whole.
respERATION- I'd drop what your trying to do with the fill right now and stick to the basic one color or a two color fade, work on some shading and thicken your lines, it'll make the whole thing pop more. Looks ragged with thick lines on the 3-D and those skinny things on the actual letters. I'd drop the eyes too, the whole thing looks stable but start from the ground up, then work into more advanced fills and working some form of character shit in there. Obvious your trying tho so keep working at it.
Freka- shits ill.
408Bomber- Structure, block lettering, than work on 3-d ,than work into extensions when you got all that shit down. You have a lifetime to master a craft, don't push it all at once.
For the record, I've been writing Graff for about a year. I don't think I'm great, I don't have a big head, I honestly want to help. I got 7 years of artistic training, I've been working with spray paint since I was 13 (six years) and I'd expect the same kind of honesty from anyone else...just saying this now, I'm new, I don't have much shit up but I'm gonna be posting so before anyone gets hurt by the remarks, I love Graff, I want to see everyone on this forum who actually tries to get to where they want to be.
bloom either click the little mountain thing and put the link there or wrap the link in tags
stunna- liking the character
change ur name
thats my crit
quick sketch before i pass out. thickened the loop on my R, i like it
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rasek-i mad love your simples man....but maybe you could go a bit more complicated??
narotik-thanks for the crits man...i'll do a sketch later and put it up....#
aser-welcome to the forum bruh ...
shit my bad i didnt see that there was two bars on the top of that e, i thought it was on big bar...
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