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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    theirs been alot of talking in this thread, if you wanna talk post some pics. if some people sketched as much as they chatted they'd be much better by now
    pen freestyle i did for a battle with mean but then he buggered off, im not happy with the e but i think it looks better than an uppercase e

    narotik- that stuff looks nice, thats for sure. i won't know how easy it is until i try it, i think everyone else whos saying its easy should try it and see if its easy, if it is then you can argue, if its difficult then you can say its actually hard and skilled
    mass- that looks like some good photoshopping even for your first time, the charac is looking alot better as well, alot more proportional. i wanna see that finished
    notavandal- what you talking about? didn't you post that?
    made- go simpler, and make sure all your bars are consistent, in some places it looks like your not even using bars
    and remember toys, give crits to get crits
  2. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    ^looks good. I think the N is a little crowded up and the drop shadow is a little off but I dont know what it is about pens that make pieces look so damn good...
    nice simples in general
  3. bleh.bleh.bleh

    bleh.bleh.bleh Senior Member

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    Last one i was quite happy with after i had re-done it in photoshop, im pretty much a first time photoshopper..even though that dosn't compare to mass's lol...crits?
  4. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    only thing im really feelin is the throwie and the charac
  5. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    The top ones have so much potential ... but the other shit is whack imo .. id stick with the top 2 theyre pretty flyyyyy
  6. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  7. bleh.bleh.bleh

    bleh.bleh.bleh Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits...I'm still trying to prgress..i jus never really have the time to sit for a couple of hours cus of family problems and stuff and i cant really see where to go next with the top two:/:confused:
  8. GaZm13

    GaZm13 Elite Member

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    Looking good ZOF! Really digging your Z and F man.
  9. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    amen - i think you should straighten out your bars, the wavey ones dont seem to be working for you imo

    bleh - second one is dope id keep working with styles like that if i were you, love the throws too especialy that E

    zof - only thing i can see wrong is the 3d at the bottom of your F is a little off

    heres a sketch i just did cus i got new markers!!!
    fucked up my L but oh well it will have to do for now, and my piece isnt slanted upwards thats just how it looks because i took the pic with a web cam
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  10. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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  11. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    spit..feelin the first one

    im gettin so frustrated with my style..i cant design an O for shit..i need some guidance..and some help on my letters
  12. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    just make the O taller like the rest of the letters, and have something stick out the on your A
  13. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    bottom page bump

    and woe...i try doing that but shit always gets fucked up..i cant make it uniform to the other i just threw the ying yang in there to say fuck it
  14. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    joga - just use the same O that you would use in a handstyle just thicken it up

    raby - those are sick, im really feeling the red one with all the cracks through it

    coloured sketch
    thats such a pad quality picture, does it no justice
    im actually kinda proud of this sketch for the time being
  15. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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    Bleh - i think those throws are sexy

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Swolen, honestly that may be one of your better L's. Fits well with the angle of the E.

    SANEKONE Senior Member

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  18. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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  19. cans905

    cans905 Senior Member

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    mass appeal- im not saying im better than u and im probably not, cuz im fairly new at this
    but u dont need to post a pic after u colour every little part
    post every time uve completed a fair chunk
    sanek- im not fond of the n on the first one, but they did progress and the last ones look good, but get rid of the weird extension on the top right of the k cuz it looks like l e
  20. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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