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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
i see mad potential.
get a little simpler and work on your flow.
even these letters out, like have them on a straight line. lose the extension on the R cos it makes it look like a B.
and props on the FREE DPM inclusion.
you from london?
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raby - thats so hot except for the Y, i dont like the way it swings to the right you know?
hal cyon - that dier is whack as fuck but the gesus is hot, keep it up
negor - all those extensions are mad ugly... , get rid of them
fonone-that stuff looks bitten, not saying it is but it looks really familar, if its your own style then props
P.S- why the hell did you quote yourself in your sig? lol
get more funky next time
this fill is so sick and i love the arrow. i love silly letters and all but that S and the first letter need some work
yeah dude ill see what i can cook up
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well seen as the shit battle didnt happen might aswel post here:
think im 'movin up' soon so might be my last post in here
irek - diggin the new style
looks good Freka
Dying to live. i dont know how i feel about the extensions coming off of the to of both the A and the L other than that the color and everything looks pretty good.
i love yuour E Fone. just love it
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Says Get, i know the smart is fucked up but i did it all in pen at work so....
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for my baby..
Akel shit is looking fresh man
the A E is sick also the crack on the e came out well
not felling the colors mate ..
bump that shit up
nice one man felling the color theme letters are dope to just not feeling the arrow thing on the bottom left of that N
thats dope i like the s and the shading in the letters
might bump my shit up aswell
any crits ?
Akel- fresh shizzle
Lime- looks alright.
get- i like parts of it.
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freka- thats fresh man, you no longer belong in toy forum like us lol
akel- throw some 3d on that and its good
get- g and e r fine but work on the t
keane- lose the extensions on the back of the k
aim- good flow but im not digging the fill
DYING-yo i like the letters and colors an every thing..nice flo..idk if it was finished or not if it was next time just add somethin in the backround..
MO-i like your letters man pretty kool style just work on the smoothness of the edges and add more color..but pretty nice..
LIME-dude fav colors bro sick asshell and i like the nick..characters,...
RASAK-1 of my favorites cuz the charachter..but over all its a raw drawing i could amagine buldings in the back tho i dont no why but ya man ur pretty good im not gunna lie..i like the second 1 as welll..
AIM-urs is pretty kool i like the bubble style but work on the color choise a lil bit..
amy winehouse, done on phitoshopp critss?
Damn, I dont come in here for two days and have about 12 pages to scroll through...theres no way I can crit all that shit but from what I remember..
Smooth, iRek, Noe Killin shit. Good to see you back DOAPPPP.
And Akel - The only thing I would change is the size of your K. Just looks a lil small compared to the rest of the piece. But its definately ill. Love all your shit man.
just a quicky i dont no if i should fill it..idk it sais mr. sib. its the name of my charcter i draw...prety laim
Project link your extensions are way to big they take away from the structure of your letters, calm it down a little and i think there will be an improvement
i don't think that would be the wisest choice.
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