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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  2. originalhomeboy

    originalhomeboy Senior Member

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    I didn't directly call him a biter. I just think there are certain similarities between the 2 pieces that are a bit suss. Only because as soon as I saw the sketch, the BABY panel came to mind straight away.

    None the less. I dig the style.
     
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  3. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    there look similar because there have similar names
    and there boot very simple letter styles i get what you being talking about :)
     
  4. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Jares- Fresh shit
    elm- clean it up a little and make the bar width the same and it will be on point.
    Pakz- letters look pretty solid, with some tweeking in will be good.
    geya- i think if you used less bars in the A it would flow better, and maybe a thicker outline.
    keane- always fresh.
     
  5. originalhomeboy

    originalhomeboy Senior Member

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  6. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    00-made-00
    cheers man =]

    i am felling the r in all of does sketches the E in the 1st & 3th sketch is striate too
    dont like any off the T try to create them from 2 bars only don't attach does bars coming from the top that dosent flow to well with rest of the piece

    2nd sketch the h is the best letter in there clean simple style the u is to small compare too the other letters have nothing against your r =] same story here goes for the T
     
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  7. bakerone

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    Hert - letters are good, but there is some one who writes hert already and they have a pretty big name if you know what i mean.
    Keane - On the top of your last E the little chunk looks like it shouldn't be there.
     
  8. originalhomeboy

    originalhomeboy Senior Member

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    Different country + theres only a certain amount of letter combinations possible.

    But yeah, I know what you mean :)
     
  9. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    hert..nice letters
    rsakens - i dunno what to think about it overall..nice use of your bars though
    baby - i like the train
    geya - i would smooth out some of those bars a bit..diggin the 3d though

    heres some simple shit
    ai300.photobucket.com_albums_nn30_AiC_TN_piecin_DSC01564.jpg
     
  10. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    The R's in those pieces look pretty nice but the rest is nasty. Like the E and the T have really bad structure especially in the second piece.

    View attachment 393083

    The outline for this looked nice but I ruined it with the grey inside outline.

    I preferred this one:

    View attachment 393084

    NY mets colours.
     
  11. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    yeah fell you man that kinda ruins the top bar of the E
    dit the same on the k peaty useless =/

    raby i am felling the 2nd one nice letters mostly like the r dope sketch man
    not feeling does cracks there look kinda randomly like you dint put much effort in them
     
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  12. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    i think my letters get worse as they go along, did the p sludgely and then thought i might as well go for some other letters
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_e9d6c5aa.jpg
    irec- i like that new style and if you want the teeth on the c to be noticed you might want to make them a bit bigger
    raby- i prefer the bottom one as well and i actually thought that b was a shit capital b, also their is only one of them extensions on the whole piece if you wanna put them in make sure that its not just one on their own
    rite- i completely agree with raby, your r's are alot better than your other letters, did you just swap from another name with an r in? i like seeing style's like that pulled off well but the only letter thats good is the r's and maybe the e in the first one. keep working on that though i wanna see it develop
    joga- its pretty simple, just connect all the bars, dont have somne seperated by black line and take out all the extensions like the one on the a, also try doing some thicker bar simples
     
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  13. calculating infinity

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  14. CakeWalk99

    CakeWalk99 Senior Member

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    Joga: Pretty cool.
    Project Link: I really like the 2nd one.

    I still be tryin'......having all of the trouble in the world with my L's and M's

    ai23.photobucket.com_albums_b351_faized_IMG_0110_1.jpg
     
  15. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Um...huh?

    iRek- I think that style would look better with a K, I mean after all R's and K's are pretty close to the same.
    ELM - Did you do the alphabet yet? Dont bend your bars quite yet. You've got to get proportions and widths and all the small but crutial stuff down first before you start trying to make funky letters.
     
  16. I GOT CLOUT

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    I hate the R. The proportions are off...just postin for talkin.

    ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a103_DeciMatioN_5_16189.jpg

    Elm - What you do is draw. Maybe focus on one letter in your name, try to make something you really like. Then make the other letters flow with it. Once you get one letter down, its just a matter of time until the others follow suit. Dont let it get you down. You cant rush good art man. Everything comes in time.
     
  17. CakeWalk99

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    Clout: Thats pretty Ill. Great colors. The R looks fine.

    I go through paper after paper, but Imma still keep on keepin on with this. NOTE: THIS IS A QUICK DRAWING TO SHOW THE STYLE I AM TRYING TO DEVELOP. ai23.photobucket.com_albums_b351_faized_IMG_0110_2.jpg

    IGNORE THE L.......the middle bar in the E is crazy too. Sorry about the horrible picture.
     
  18. "Riot"

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    ay bro.
    that M had alot of potential and shit.
    but dont bend your letters so hard. thicken up your letters a bit. take up more of the paper or try to do it letter by letter.

    l......l<===thickness of your letters.
    l.................l<===== make them around this thick.



    dont change it from thick to skinny either.
    get your simples.
     
  19. respERATION

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  20. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Yeah Elm...that M is the best letter you've drawn yet. I did a quick sketch just trying to show you how you can mold your other letters around that M.
    ai10.photobucket.com_albums_a103_DeciMatioN_5_16190.jpg

    Listen to Riot, you should be taking up more space on the page. It just helps with the structure. When its that small the proportions can be very easily distorted. And you should be going through page after page, I went through about 50 one day just on handies. Its just the little things that help.